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me, myself and i
Me
Myself
I
i feel like im dieing inside,
i feel im nothing,
pain goes right through me,
love goes through me,
i make myself feel worried,scared, sad
i wish to be happy again,
i wish to love again.
if u like to help u shell
Myself
I
i feel like im dieing inside,
i feel im nothing,
pain goes right through me,
love goes through me,
i make myself feel worried,scared, sad
i wish to be happy again,
i wish to love again.
if u like to help u shell
Published 21st Oct 2012
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22nd Oct 2012 2:55pm
wow sweet, i love your short, stripped writing style it knocks my ankle bracelet and rides my headband. i loved the way this piece went from despair to hope in such a flowing rythmic way.
xoxo
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23rd Oct 2012 2:58am
