slip into (this is a true story and i am not ashamed of my new experience with death!)

Plz never try n kill urself again, as i said to u earlier think about ur family and friends that will miss u!

i understand, but its hard to love the things in life, but your latest poem proves me wrong and i will emberase life!!!!

well written and pl dont kill yourself and when hanging your head will get super hot blood coming out of your mouth bad way to go. enjoy life and your freinds hear

Woah. Really? Thanks for the idea. I'll always keep that one in mind.

This is a very powerful piece of art. Rare and intricate in a very special way.

What do you suppose is waiting on the other side? I have felt the detachment of approaching death a few times, never liked it. I didn't like the loss of control and the sudden realization that wherever I was going was not what I was looking for. It will come in its own time, so ending your life serves no purpose. There's no coming back from the other side and it will have its way with you in ways that make whatever you are leaving behind will seem like paradise. Get life right while you are still in possession of it! You have 5 lifetimes ahead of you and if it ends now, there will be one eternity that suicide will not make you happy. So why nnot give the physical world a chance to give you something you'll never get on the other side. Lifestyles can be changed any time you let yourself change it. Deathstyles are a one time, one way ticket to an unknown destination that nno matter how romantic the dark side might seem from where you are now, it's an illusion where no romance is there to be had. Reality may seem like an illusion, but once it becomes permanent, you're stuck with what you get, forever... JJ

well thank you every one but once again this is my choice

I don't know you very much at all or what all is behind this desire to die, but as someone who has been down that road more times than I want to remember, all I can say is that you won't fix what's wrong in death and you have allowed yourself to be consumed in a portrait painted by someone elses imagination. Paint your own picture 'cos the one you are looking at is a metaphor inside of a dream. The only way to change the future is to be a part of it. There is no future in death. Afterlife is a romance novel for the religous. jj

not anymore i read this and u will not kill ur self i will not let u matt will not let u and if u do matt will kill him self and we will miss u sooooo much

ooh hun, what i read there was raw emotions written down for the world to see, so i have to say i'm proud of you. not many have the guts to admit they feel the urge, even less are happy to talk about it. well done you are a superstar. i think you did a lovely job of the poem and i loved how you ended with that candid self expression of mind change, awsome really, oh and if you just need a hug, i do hugs ;)

kisses from p

xoxo
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wow!! thankyou, i have never had such a complement!! im am breath taken and shure, id love a hug

You seem like a really great person and friend. Im proud of you, like Pascalle, that you wrote this. It must've been kind of hard to do that. Either way im glad your Aunt called you back to Earth. Make your stay enjoyable. ***
~Sarah

thanx, i thought people wouldhath been disgusted with this but obviously not so trhank you all

Lets just say don't do it
I mean stay because
Everyone likes to see Eli
With his weird moments
And him putting a flower in his ear
You better not kill urself
Unless I'm there by ur side