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my heart
You stole my heart so long ago.
You took me by surprise.
The happiest years of my life i recieved in return.
Swept off my feet.
Rendered speechless with emotion
Your laughter, the most wonderful thing i have ever heard, is my favourite song.
The way our bodies melt together.
A perfect fit.
Like a glove.
Your touch shoots electricity through my veins.
Even after so many years.
Your beauty, ferociously snatches the breath from my lungs, every time i see you.
Alas,
I don't know when i will see you next.
You are so far across the world right now.
With one who recently stole your heart from me.
She then placed her own heart where mine was once cherished.
i am left with a magnificent sense of loss.
My heart, so broken, it no longer beats.
A dead weight of emptiness.
Unimaginably heavy.
Slows down my every move.
I hide in the confinement of my confusion.
Shattered dreams.
I'm consumed with grief.
I have no motivation.
I'm lost.
The world around me is shrouded in darkness.
Happiness no longer exists.
I close my eyes.
Hold my breath.
As i fade i pray i can sleep forever.
.
You took me by surprise.
The happiest years of my life i recieved in return.
Swept off my feet.
Rendered speechless with emotion
Your laughter, the most wonderful thing i have ever heard, is my favourite song.
The way our bodies melt together.
A perfect fit.
Like a glove.
Your touch shoots electricity through my veins.
Even after so many years.
Your beauty, ferociously snatches the breath from my lungs, every time i see you.
Alas,
I don't know when i will see you next.
You are so far across the world right now.
With one who recently stole your heart from me.
She then placed her own heart where mine was once cherished.
i am left with a magnificent sense of loss.
My heart, so broken, it no longer beats.
A dead weight of emptiness.
Unimaginably heavy.
Slows down my every move.
I hide in the confinement of my confusion.
Shattered dreams.
I'm consumed with grief.
I have no motivation.
I'm lost.
The world around me is shrouded in darkness.
Happiness no longer exists.
I close my eyes.
Hold my breath.
As i fade i pray i can sleep forever.
.
Published 20th Oct 2012
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20th Oct 2012 6:59pm
The description of love, betrayal and heartbreak is wonderfully displayed in your writing.
It's so sad and full of definition.
Some of my favs:
Your beauty, ferociously snatches the breath from my lungs, every time i see you.
Alas,
I don't know when i will see you next.
You are so far across the world right now.
With one who recently stole your heart from me.
She then placed her own heart where mine was once cherished.
The ending:
I'm lost.
The world around me is shrouded in darkness.
Happiness no longer exists.
I close my eyes.
Hold my breath.
As i fade i pray i can sleep forever.
Devastatingly beautiful and touching.
Love your way with words!
It's so sad and full of definition.
Some of my favs:
Your beauty, ferociously snatches the breath from my lungs, every time i see you.
Alas,
I don't know when i will see you next.
You are so far across the world right now.
With one who recently stole your heart from me.
She then placed her own heart where mine was once cherished.
The ending:
I'm lost.
The world around me is shrouded in darkness.
Happiness no longer exists.
I close my eyes.
Hold my breath.
As i fade i pray i can sleep forever.
Devastatingly beautiful and touching.
Love your way with words!
21st Oct 2012 1:09am
thankyou so much. I'm so glad that atleast people can enjoy what i write
