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"The Darkness YES Within" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 18/10/2012
My Soul Wishes To Sin ...
And Embrace This At A Whim ....
A Wish To Kill ALL THINGS ... !!!
Kill The Human Race ... !!!
And All of It's FALSE Grace ...
ALL of It's FALSE Heads ...
Who Couldn't Care Much Less ...
About Their ... LIES ...
About What They DENY ...
About This Thing That They Call Life ...
This Life of Strife And Ignorant Types ...
Who Feel NO SHAME In Dishing Out Pain ... !?!
I Take From Their Souls ...
And Enjoy The Blood Drain ...
As If I Were Able To Send CAIN Insane ... !!!!!
YES ... Once Again ... !!!!!
Leaving Them Whole With No Place To Erase ....
The Vision of Their Livelihoods ROTTING Down The Drain ... !!!!
Pulling Insides Out ... And Outsides Into Flames ... !!!!!
Who Thought That HELL Would Be This Thing ...
Someone Could Sell As .... " FAME " ...
I Sell It ALL THE SAME Because My Soul's ASHAMED ...
To Be A Part of The ... Human Race ... !!!!!
That's Become So ... INHUMANE ... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bloodsuckers Hunting Veins ...
On Which To Prey And Claim ...
The Lives of Those They Never Loved ...
But CLAIMED To ... ALL THE SAME ...
"We want to see the best for you !"
A LIE They SOLD As TRUTH ... !!!
Just Do As You Are TOLD ...
DON'T Get TOO BOLD ...
And You'll Retain Your Youth ....
Well Here's The TRUTH ... !!!
My Wish For You To SUFFER Has Now Become The GLUE ...
That Fuels My Mood To Do What's CRUDE And Choose To Just ABUSE ... !!!!!
ALL The Rules That PROVE How CRUEL Our Actions Are ... In TRUTH ... !!!!!!!!!!!!
How Low We Stoop To Fill The Coop
of DIRTY Loops We Eat As Food ... !!!
The LIES, ABUSE, VILENESS, UNTRUTHS,
DENIAL And Trials We KEEP On File ...
To FILE AWAY And Nurture Hate ...
And KEEP UNITY LOCKED BEHIND GATES ... !?!
It Is These Things ...
That Make Me Think ...
of Living Life To Sin ....
Sins Designed For The Genocide ...
And Death of ALL Mankind .... !!!!!!
An End That Now Begins ...
As My Light Slowly Dims .....................................................
" The Darkness YES Within " ................
And Embrace This At A Whim ....
A Wish To Kill ALL THINGS ... !!!
Kill The Human Race ... !!!
And All of It's FALSE Grace ...
ALL of It's FALSE Heads ...
Who Couldn't Care Much Less ...
About Their ... LIES ...
About What They DENY ...
About This Thing That They Call Life ...
This Life of Strife And Ignorant Types ...
Who Feel NO SHAME In Dishing Out Pain ... !?!
I Take From Their Souls ...
And Enjoy The Blood Drain ...
As If I Were Able To Send CAIN Insane ... !!!!!
YES ... Once Again ... !!!!!
Leaving Them Whole With No Place To Erase ....
The Vision of Their Livelihoods ROTTING Down The Drain ... !!!!
Pulling Insides Out ... And Outsides Into Flames ... !!!!!
Who Thought That HELL Would Be This Thing ...
Someone Could Sell As .... " FAME " ...
I Sell It ALL THE SAME Because My Soul's ASHAMED ...
To Be A Part of The ... Human Race ... !!!!!
That's Become So ... INHUMANE ... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bloodsuckers Hunting Veins ...
On Which To Prey And Claim ...
The Lives of Those They Never Loved ...
But CLAIMED To ... ALL THE SAME ...
"We want to see the best for you !"
A LIE They SOLD As TRUTH ... !!!
Just Do As You Are TOLD ...
DON'T Get TOO BOLD ...
And You'll Retain Your Youth ....
Well Here's The TRUTH ... !!!
My Wish For You To SUFFER Has Now Become The GLUE ...
That Fuels My Mood To Do What's CRUDE And Choose To Just ABUSE ... !!!!!
ALL The Rules That PROVE How CRUEL Our Actions Are ... In TRUTH ... !!!!!!!!!!!!
How Low We Stoop To Fill The Coop
of DIRTY Loops We Eat As Food ... !!!
The LIES, ABUSE, VILENESS, UNTRUTHS,
DENIAL And Trials We KEEP On File ...
To FILE AWAY And Nurture Hate ...
And KEEP UNITY LOCKED BEHIND GATES ... !?!
It Is These Things ...
That Make Me Think ...
of Living Life To Sin ....
Sins Designed For The Genocide ...
And Death of ALL Mankind .... !!!!!!
An End That Now Begins ...
As My Light Slowly Dims .....................................................
" The Darkness YES Within " ................
Published 19th Oct 2012
| Edited 1st Feb 2020
Author's Note
Sometimes, when looking at humans and the realities of how we actually treat each other, it can take you to a dark place, this piece reflects such a time for me.
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Anonymous
20th Oct 2012 5:01pm
Nicely written, yet again you capture a feeling and write as you speak it. How true your words are. How sad we make this place for ourselves to be.
16th Dec 2012 4:47pm
Got to read all your poems out loud to get the full value out of it. Read and read this is good stuff. Verbally, the flow is very smooth and rhymes are constant, endless, an relentless. The message, seems to draw out the fact that the darkness "within" is really just a reflection of the darkness percieved from the outside.
I likd the lines:
"to ....file away...???
and ... nurture hate...
and keep...unity...
locked behind...gates...!?!"
They equate hate with a disconnection between people; a lack of unity. This disconnection you spoke of in the line about the human race becoming inhumane (i liked the pun) Good writes again.
I likd the lines:
"to ....file away...???
and ... nurture hate...
and keep...unity...
locked behind...gates...!?!"
They equate hate with a disconnection between people; a lack of unity. This disconnection you spoke of in the line about the human race becoming inhumane (i liked the pun) Good writes again.
Well WM ...
I have been told on numerous occasions by a good friend of mine that what I do has .... " Mileage " ....
Reading it aloud, will, i'm sure, help readers connect to it, so, i'm glad that reading it has added to it's value for you ...
To be honest, I REALLY like how this came out & flowed ....
Dark indeed, .... seemingly .... ?
"Too Dark" ..... for those whose darkness, actually resides deep inside ... themselves maybe ... ?
Anyway ... Really appreciate the comment man !!!
Thnx
Virge
I have been told on numerous occasions by a good friend of mine that what I do has .... " Mileage " ....
Reading it aloud, will, i'm sure, help readers connect to it, so, i'm glad that reading it has added to it's value for you ...
To be honest, I REALLY like how this came out & flowed ....
Dark indeed, .... seemingly .... ?
"Too Dark" ..... for those whose darkness, actually resides deep inside ... themselves maybe ... ?
Anyway ... Really appreciate the comment man !!!
Thnx
Virge
