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death of a daisy
A daisy flower
is so much more
than humans give us credit for
the very first flowers of Amour
We know we're special
from our birth
our womb is the brown
of our mother earth
our petals grasping for the sky
unfurling yet we know not why
on whispers of wind
our elders laugh
and a pretty young girl
skips down the path
humming tunes of a love yet to be
upon seeing our petals
she drops to her knees
sweet young thing pretty as you please
our petals stretch out
we are ready for flight
we will catch the wind
to be gone from your sight
it's time say the elders
to do what you aught
as the pretty girl sings
love me love me not
is so much more
than humans give us credit for
the very first flowers of Amour
We know we're special
from our birth
our womb is the brown
of our mother earth
our petals grasping for the sky
unfurling yet we know not why
on whispers of wind
our elders laugh
and a pretty young girl
skips down the path
humming tunes of a love yet to be
upon seeing our petals
she drops to her knees
sweet young thing pretty as you please
our petals stretch out
we are ready for flight
we will catch the wind
to be gone from your sight
it's time say the elders
to do what you aught
as the pretty girl sings
love me love me not
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Anonymous
18th Oct 2012 9:24pm
This is great Shaunda! Its so beautiful, I see the images come to life before me, the flower unfolding its petals reaching out.
In this poem I see both sadness and innocence
Thanks for sharing,I feel its a very special poem.
MĪ
In this poem I see both sadness and innocence
Thanks for sharing,I feel its a very special poem.
MĪ
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re: Re: death of a daisy
18th Oct 2012 9:28pm
Thank you so much. If you look closely, you will see the entire flower is made from beautiful nude women. Cool huh.
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Anonymous
18th Oct 2012 9:31pm
Yes, indeed, I see it now, thats amazing!
Pretty cool indeed
Pretty cool indeed
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18th Oct 2012 9:32pm
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