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One-Sided Love
Your love is like a soothing lotion
It fills the cracks in my heart to bring sounds of subtle laughter
I yearn for you like tears falling down cheeks, searching for the fountain of youth
I can smell you in the air, and feel your movement surround me with the essence of kiddy-like play
I feel your breath on my body, heating me up when I am cold
Making me rise like lava, and creeping to burn every place you touch
The stress of life itself makes me tense, and the thought of you releasing me makes me want to scream
Better yet, when I close my eyes, I can feel your body
I listen for your whispers to blunt the piercing silence
Your heartbeat makes me tingle, and I can feel your vibrations breaking me
The only problem is that I want you
I want you like a suicide wants a reason
I want you in every place that nobody can reach
I want you so bad that that I open my eyes, and wake up.
It fills the cracks in my heart to bring sounds of subtle laughter
I yearn for you like tears falling down cheeks, searching for the fountain of youth
I can smell you in the air, and feel your movement surround me with the essence of kiddy-like play
I feel your breath on my body, heating me up when I am cold
Making me rise like lava, and creeping to burn every place you touch
The stress of life itself makes me tense, and the thought of you releasing me makes me want to scream
Better yet, when I close my eyes, I can feel your body
I listen for your whispers to blunt the piercing silence
Your heartbeat makes me tingle, and I can feel your vibrations breaking me
The only problem is that I want you
I want you like a suicide wants a reason
I want you in every place that nobody can reach
I want you so bad that that I open my eyes, and wake up.
Published 14th Oct 2012
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Anonymous
14th Oct 2012 3:14pm
Oh I loved this
Every suicide needs a reason
Like you just cannot be
Without your love
Awesome!!
Every suicide needs a reason
Like you just cannot be
Without your love
Awesome!!
14th Oct 2012 10:05pm
Thank you.
I was a little worried about adding that part.
You`re awesome.
I was a little worried about adding that part.
You`re awesome.
Anonymous
14th Oct 2012 4:29pm
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14th Oct 2012 11:13pm
16th Oct 2012 2:15am
SOFT N DEEP! lots of 'like' like like... poetry should be an elaboration with out reference! on the other hand it give's a sense of identity to the text. food for thought ;)
20th Oct 2012 8:01am
Thank you.
So, I shouldn`t use like to compare? Could you give me some tips on how to do it differently?
So, I shouldn`t use like to compare? Could you give me some tips on how to do it differently?
16th Nov 2012 10:33pm
"Like suicide wants a reason" I like this poem ecspecially that line. Keep it up
