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Burn Down
Your supremacy kills me
Always packing in lies as it builds me
When will you lay yourself down
Fall, and crumble back to where you were found
I am tempted to submit to your clique
To bad; I choose not to succumb for I`m rather unique
One could say that the good die young
Words hurt and still you let harsh nothings slip from your tongue
Oh Ho Ho, how fucking unfortunate
You prance around like a king, yet you are subordinate
Why should I adorn you
My hatred, My disgust, My lust is sworn to you
Honestly, your ego deserves to burn down along with your pride
We are all just friends here, that is why I must abide
Always packing in lies as it builds me
When will you lay yourself down
Fall, and crumble back to where you were found
I am tempted to submit to your clique
To bad; I choose not to succumb for I`m rather unique
One could say that the good die young
Words hurt and still you let harsh nothings slip from your tongue
Oh Ho Ho, how fucking unfortunate
You prance around like a king, yet you are subordinate
Why should I adorn you
My hatred, My disgust, My lust is sworn to you
Honestly, your ego deserves to burn down along with your pride
We are all just friends here, that is why I must abide
Published 12th Oct 2012
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- Edited 13th Oct 2012 7:32am
12th Oct 2012 10:03am
mmmmm. This one beats around my head, like a football match, dribble, dribble...pass. Would be friggen curious as to who reciever is. But then again, that is what it was meant to do. Enjoyed.
12th Oct 2012 3:39pm
I began the poem by using a word from the title of a song, and from then on as well, but as I got to the end, I think I lost it a little.
Thank you. :)
Thank you. :)
28th Dec 2013 1:43am
I very much enjoyed reading this. I think you have a real talent for this.
28th Dec 2013 1:59am
Thank you. I actually agree. Not sure where I get it, but feeling angry and disgusted seems to be easy for me to write about.
