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Completion by Separation - competition entry
I think progressively
I feel passionately
I know everything
I want equality
I hope eternally
JJ
*10/13/2012
(Completion by Separation- competition entry)
* After entering this competition, I realized that mikimoondancer had actually written more words of this poem than I did. I only added one word at the end of each line, as she had the beginnings of each line already set. So in reality, she deserves writing credit and mention as collaborator. Check out the comp @ http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/3569/15/
I feel passionately
I know everything
I want equality
I hope eternally
JJ
*10/13/2012
(Completion by Separation- competition entry)
* After entering this competition, I realized that mikimoondancer had actually written more words of this poem than I did. I only added one word at the end of each line, as she had the beginnings of each line already set. So in reality, she deserves writing credit and mention as collaborator. Check out the comp @ http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/3569/15/
Published 14th Oct 2012
| Edited 7th Dec 2012
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14th Oct 2012 5:35pm
Eternal hope... what an interesting to write, JJ. Very short, but in a way, I would say that is a nice write... and I hardly ever say that about shorter poems. i tend to like longer and more detailed ones.
14th Oct 2012 10:11pm
The structure was defined by the contest. I was thinking of expanding on the poem after the contest is over. You know me, I rarely write anything that short, lol. Check out the competition and it will make more sense. i actually thought about writing it in very long run on sentences just to be funny. I may still do that and enter a second poem, lol!!!! Thank you for. for commenting Jess! JJ
18th Oct 2012 10:41am
I entered 5 and they all kinda tied together in a way so i'm thinking of making all 5 into one poem
I think I posted my 1st one 2 spots down from your's I was't gonna post till I read yours
I hope eternally
That line made me want to do an entry into my first competition. Thanks for writing it!!
I think I posted my 1st one 2 spots down from your's I was't gonna post till I read yours
I hope eternally
That line made me want to do an entry into my first competition. Thanks for writing it!!
18th Oct 2012 11:32am
Thanks for commenting and you're welcome. It's nice to inspire others. I charge by the hour for my musings, lol! jj
18th Oct 2012 10:17pm
Indeed. You usually do charge by the hour, but I suppose your help and inspiration you provide is worth it. Lol xD
19th Oct 2012 4:21am
Thanks Jess, but you of all people know that I don't have to charge anything at all because the musings I give away come back to me in full...! jj
