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THE NO-NONSENSE NUDE MODEL
Hold me in your vision but not your arms
When I take off my clothes and you see the charms
Of my good firm body, proud of it much,
But strictest message is: SEE – DO NOT TOUCH.
So don't think of painting me on your bed:
I am my betrothed’s and due to be wed.
Yes, I like sex but keep it for marriage,
When bridegroom’s led me off the bridal carriage.
Before you ask, ‘Is he a painter too?’
No – but he will buy this painting from you.
Just because a woman poses in nude,
It doesn’t mean she’s ‘up for’ being lewd.
I want to show I’m not one of the tarts,
So give me something to cover my parts!
Published 12th Oct 2012
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13th Oct 2012 00:11am
15th Oct 2012 8:32pm
I like the thought that nude does not equal willing and/or wanting. Well done.
30th Nov 2019 1:22pm
Yeahhh cover your parts neh,.. I'm soo impressed that you realise and state that coupling should be in marital bonds only, wow I didn't expect that from you since you write only the erotica genre, but this poem taught me not to form opinions too fast.
That's why you don't post your own photo in the nude right though you said you mostly stay naked.....
I hold this awesome poem in high esteem and I believe sth call it providence or what, sth made me spot this poem of all your many. We should all hold the forbidden fruit only in the vision and not seek to persuade real contact with all we may lust after... That's your great point!! Being faithful also is key as you touch in your betrothed line. Kudos great poet!!!
That's why you don't post your own photo in the nude right though you said you mostly stay naked.....
I hold this awesome poem in high esteem and I believe sth call it providence or what, sth made me spot this poem of all your many. We should all hold the forbidden fruit only in the vision and not seek to persuade real contact with all we may lust after... That's your great point!! Being faithful also is key as you touch in your betrothed line. Kudos great poet!!!
