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Sensitive
Im upset
half depressed
no allowing myself to rest
most times my minds like a self mental reck
yep, those who dont need me will not believe it
I hope everybody think this, atleast mabe a wish
nope I geussed it cant be fixed only corrected
half depressed
no allowing myself to rest
most times my minds like a self mental reck
yep, those who dont need me will not believe it
I hope everybody think this, atleast mabe a wish
nope I geussed it cant be fixed only corrected
Published 10th Oct 2012
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- Edited 10th Oct 2012 5:01pm
10th Oct 2012 2:33pm
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11th Oct 2012 4:17am
No harm done. I love the constructive criticism you wrote me. Actually if you never wrote that comment I would not have fixed my other poem. Which i'm more satisfied with the results of now than I was with the earlyier draft. Infact I'd like for you to check out my other poem. Mabe give me your honest opinion i'd really appreciate it. I've read a couple of your poems and i'm deffinetly a fan. I'll reach my climax of potential one day. Although excluding the unnecessary criticism please. For in my eyes everything has a reason and a purpose. Its the thought that counts, to me anyway. Broom1692
