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Deliciously Vicious
Bees Knees
Salacious tease
Apease, please
I'm onto my knees
Throttle, grottle
Make me swallow
Dragged, ragged
Scratched and lashed
I crash,
You smile,
and pile on top of me
Sweat,
You've been fed
Now let me sleep in your filthy bed
Wait
I've changed my mind
I want you one more time
Deliciously Vicious,
You make me cum every time.
Salacious tease
Apease, please
I'm onto my knees
Throttle, grottle
Make me swallow
Dragged, ragged
Scratched and lashed
I crash,
You smile,
and pile on top of me
Sweat,
You've been fed
Now let me sleep in your filthy bed
Wait
I've changed my mind
I want you one more time
Deliciously Vicious,
You make me cum every time.
Published 16th May 2010
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18th May 2010 7:19pm
21st May 2010 12:07pm
21st Mar 2011 11:40am
'Now let me sleep in your filthy bed
Wait
I've changed my mind
I want you one more time
Deliciously Vicious, ' Nicely done, even "cum" doesn't feel smutty, it's got a class to it. Nice work.
Wait
I've changed my mind
I want you one more time
Deliciously Vicious, ' Nicely done, even "cum" doesn't feel smutty, it's got a class to it. Nice work.
21st Mar 2011 11:45am
...and find a little gold. Nice little piece, unloved too long. This feels like 'young' work, and an avenue someone with rhyme talent would go down, nicely mixed with some real observation....work on what you got baby...
22nd Mar 2011 9:32pm
Just a little note to say thank you for your kind and inspiring comments.
Can't go wrong with 'awesome' 'sexy' 'gold' and even 'class' (thanks LA :) )
I will continue to work on what I got ;)
Much love xxx
Can't go wrong with 'awesome' 'sexy' 'gold' and even 'class' (thanks LA :) )
I will continue to work on what I got ;)
Much love xxx
22nd Mar 2011 9:57pm
