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Pain

How far can you push me?

Before I complain

Hit me and whip me

Physical pain

Tie me up

Pinch me and bite

All of this I love

I will not fight

Humiliate me

I�ll run and hide

Mental torture

I can�t abide

Stab my heart

I�ll runaway

No more hurt

No more play

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Written by geminisub

(geminisb)

Published 7th Oct 2012 | Edited 10th Oct 2012

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Re: Pain

synthetic1 (Bbbbbbbb)

7th Oct 2012 3:42pm

hi geminisub... i really like this and especially as you cover so many forms of pain but to me i think mental torture (which indirectly covers all the other forms as you loose credibility and confidence) mental torture is the most affecting....

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geminisub (geminisb)

7th Oct 2012 4:20pm

Thank you again synthetic1. Mental torture is the most affecting and long lasting. Being ignored is mental torture to me.

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Re: Pain

JohnnyDepth

8th Oct 2012 4:29pm

loved reading this geminisub tnx for posting xD
mental torture leaves mighty deep scars

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Re: Pain

MissJayne

10th Oct 2012 00:22am

My favorite lines:
"Humiliate me
I�ll run and hide
Mental torture
I can�t abide"

Interesting how you turn the whole idea of pain over on its head... most often we say we won't tolerate people abusing us physically yet we put up with those who do it verbally....