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[some] One Like You
poom+fotobyDKzkThuOc4201212:43pm
·
so
beautiful......
eye w
w ... w ..
weep
to know that You
are
here-in-This-World
&
i will never
hold
Your hand nor
feel your
body
close to that-which-remains
of
'me'........in-This Life
vvvvvvvvvdkzkOctOber2012vvvvvvv
·
so
beautiful......
eye w
w ... w ..
weep
to know that You
are
here-in-This-World
&
i will never
hold
Your hand nor
feel your
body
close to that-which-remains
of
'me'........in-This Life
vvvvvvvvvdkzkOctOber2012vvvvvvv
Published 5th Oct 2012
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5th Oct 2012 3:19am
5th Oct 2012 4:37am
5th Oct 2012 3:47am
Yes, chief. This does everything a poem should,and then it ends. It has just enough structure to give it an excellent pace without getting in the way. Shines like a tiny star.
5th Oct 2012 4:39am
wow...thank ye Braggo
eye all
ways wondered what a poom 'should do'...?Ha!
butt what should "I"
d
o ?
eye all
ways wondered what a poom 'should do'...?Ha!
butt what should "I"
d
o ?
9th Oct 2012 3:34pm
Daniel
this piece of beautiful write tempts one for a wholesome poetry reading....with emooootions!
enjoyed this , esp. the shivering w.
w..
w.. weep & the lines that reminds me of an elusive yet some eternal love..
thanxx fr this ebbing-flowing share.
~uma.
9th Oct 2012 6:16pm
