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Fear
I hear a whisper
So soft and so frail
So silently muttered
So lost and so pale
It reaches my ears and my eyes weep a tear
For their small, hidden meaning is drenched with a fear
A fear for the life and the world, oh so real
The troubles and pain that we’ll all have to feel
The meaning remains when the whisper’s long gone
The fear I have gained was never so strong
So soft and so frail
So silently muttered
So lost and so pale
It reaches my ears and my eyes weep a tear
For their small, hidden meaning is drenched with a fear
A fear for the life and the world, oh so real
The troubles and pain that we’ll all have to feel
The meaning remains when the whisper’s long gone
The fear I have gained was never so strong
Published 3rd Oct 2012
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4th Oct 2012 8:17am
I like what you have done. I think you should keep going with it though. It is a interesting subject with a lot of potential that you can draw out from it. Expand upon the language and see where it takes you.
