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You didn't notice..
I tried to give you my heart but you were too busy to notice
I tried to tell you i love you but your music was too loud
I tried to call to you for help but you were helping someone else
I tried to warn you about what i was doing but you payed no attention
I tried to tell you goodbye but you were telling someone else hello
I tried to give you my heart but you were too busy to notice....
I tried to tell you i love you but your music was too loud
I tried to call to you for help but you were helping someone else
I tried to warn you about what i was doing but you payed no attention
I tried to tell you goodbye but you were telling someone else hello
I tried to give you my heart but you were too busy to notice....
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Re: You didn't notice..
3rd Oct 2012 00:25am
hmm, really like this....reminds me of a song about how hard it is when you love or want someone so bad, but they are oblivious
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re: Re: You didn't notice..
6th Oct 2012 00:40am
Glad you liked it :) sounds like an interesting song..what's it called?
re: Re: You didn't notice..
17th Nov 2012 4:08am
Re: You didn't notice..
3rd Oct 2012 3:02am
Eternal pain, heartbreaking but so very true in so many different levels.
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6th Oct 2012 00:42am
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21st Nov 2012 00:52am
I wrote this when i was crushing on this guy. I hope you find someone that is better than your ex, that feeling really sucks. Thank you for the feedback (:
Re: You didn't notice..
26th Nov 2012 11:39am
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29th Nov 2012 00:19am
I'll try, i haven't had much time to write, and when i do i get horrible writer's block
Re: You didn't notice..
4th Dec 2012 10:58pm
Oh shy <3 you know i'll always love you (anonymous person you text lots) :)
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re: Re: You didn't notice..
7th Dec 2012 8:10pm
Lol i love you too lyssa! Haha i knew who this was just by your username :p glad you finally looked me up on here, love :3