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The other woman
What does she mean to you, should I ask?
I may not like the reply
How does she feel while in your arms?
Do you make her fly?
Does she give to you, all she has?
Do you make her cry?
When you leave and come to me
Does she wonder why?
Published 2nd Oct 2012
| Edited 3rd Oct 2012
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5th Oct 2012 1:51am
Wow... short and direct...this is a hard one as id hate it if i was the other women but we cannot help who we fall in love with can we....
6th Oct 2012 2:42pm
No we can't!
This poem can be from his woman's or the other woman's perspective.
Thanks again.
This poem can be from his woman's or the other woman's perspective.
Thanks again.
