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Squeeze my Lemons till the juice runs down my leg
I'm heading home I have a date
Chills play my spine I pass my gate
Time to eat hope I'm not late
I rush myself up spiral stairs
I'm hurrying cause I like mine rare
It's dinner time I'm feeling fine
I lick my chops and grab my wine
I sing and dance across the room
To one of Zeppelins slinky tunes
(squeeze my lemons till the juice runs down my leg, squeeze it so hard till I fall right out of bed)
Alas with ringing of the bell
Wafts cross the room OH delightful smell
I sit to eat Has it gone too far
You know I like my meat Tartar
I squeeze some lemon on his leg
And lick my lips as i am fed
I slurp His blood so delightfully red
My secrets out I love the dead
Daintily I wipe my chin
Daintily And then I grin
Chills play my spine I pass my gate
Time to eat hope I'm not late
I rush myself up spiral stairs
I'm hurrying cause I like mine rare
It's dinner time I'm feeling fine
I lick my chops and grab my wine
I sing and dance across the room
To one of Zeppelins slinky tunes
(squeeze my lemons till the juice runs down my leg, squeeze it so hard till I fall right out of bed)
Alas with ringing of the bell
Wafts cross the room OH delightful smell
I sit to eat Has it gone too far
You know I like my meat Tartar
I squeeze some lemon on his leg
And lick my lips as i am fed
I slurp His blood so delightfully red
My secrets out I love the dead
Daintily I wipe my chin
Daintily And then I grin
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Re: Squeeze my lemon till the juice runs down my leg
2nd Oct 2012 5:13pm
Very cool "I sing and dance across the room
To one of Zeppelins slinky tunes" Go girl im right with you on that one.
cheers
zenith
To one of Zeppelins slinky tunes" Go girl im right with you on that one.
cheers
zenith
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2nd Oct 2012 5:20pm
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3rd Oct 2012 1:20pm
First,the title is just too cool.It sort of gives one an idea of the poem before even reading it and when I finally started reading,I realised that there was so much mire to the poem and your style is really cool.I can see that you make your words your own and that's commendable because many people(me)try to sound like their favourite poets and you just go your own way about it.Nice one.
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3rd Oct 2012 1:21pm
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3rd Oct 2012 5:58pm
Mire huh? I guess I'll have to try that brand of wine. lol Thank you so much for your comments.
Re: Squeeze my lemon till the juice runs down my leg
3rd Oct 2012 2:57pm
lol i this was cute...very talented you are and btw ....The title is fantastic
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re: Re: Squeeze my lemon till the juice runs down my leg
3rd Oct 2012 6:16pm
Thanx. Title is from one of my favorite Zeppelin songs called "traveling riverside blues".
Rock n roll ;O)
Rock n roll ;O)
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24th Oct 2012 5:10pm
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24th Oct 2012 8:28pm
thank you again Broomie. It was nice doing a fun one after all the dark ones I did.
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25th Oct 2012 3:53pm
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