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all of my love
ALL of My LOVE,
ALL my LOVE
ALL FOR YOU.
All of my PAIN, All my PAIN for YOU too.
To YOU My Dark Angel,
I OFFER MY SOUL...
To Take, and to KEEP, and to be Of CONTROL.
ALL OF MY EVERYTHING, EVERYTHING YOURS.
To YOU, FROM THE HEART of ME, EVERYTHING POURS
ALL my LOVE
ALL FOR YOU.
All of my PAIN, All my PAIN for YOU too.
To YOU My Dark Angel,
I OFFER MY SOUL...
To Take, and to KEEP, and to be Of CONTROL.
ALL OF MY EVERYTHING, EVERYTHING YOURS.
To YOU, FROM THE HEART of ME, EVERYTHING POURS
Published 29th Sep 2012
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Anonymous
29th Sep 2012 6:12pm
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6th Oct 2012 10:00am
For some reason the line, "To Take, and to KEEP, and to be Of CONTROL," sticks in my head. "OF" rather then "In"; any meaning in that word choice,
I can help but also note that the start resembles a Led Zep song.
Welecome to DU
I can help but also note that the start resembles a Led Zep song.
Welecome to DU
10th Oct 2012 4:11am
Well jazzmanor to answer you question.... To me it was just proper grammer i think... lol To Take, and to KEEP, and to be Of CONTROL, it seems not to work if "in control" were instead used. yaa know???
