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The Pernicious Poet, the lugubrious side of art.
Disturbing is the scene that is seen
the destruction of a love dream,
dreams I dared, dared I tell you, to believe
were true heartfelt and meant for me.
Ahh but reality ever the cruel mistress
never fails to enlighten me, but I digress,
let me explain this finely composed mess
of pretty words spoken to deftly impress.
Ohh such is power of poets and bards
that we can manipulate the eager heart,
sweet words served up succulently a la cart,
professing feelings that leave only scars.
We think so little of the syllables said
after they vacate the mouth they have left.
Does anyone truly realize the weapon in the words?
To an ignorant mind it seems ridiculously absurd.
The truth is words injure, scar and assail,
they can be unforgiving for female or male;
indiscriminate attackers, their wounds never fail.
How could you author such a beastly tale?
We bleed our woes in ink across these pages,
describing it blow by blow or in injurious stages;
you climb upon your soap box versifying for all ages,
seeing a kindred in me, you fall into masculine messages.
You used your manly wiles to lull and seduce,
hypnotizing any and all with your word use;
it is cruel and obscene this cleverly created ruse,
careful lover, Karma is a bitch, one day it will be you!
Gypsy Red
the destruction of a love dream,
dreams I dared, dared I tell you, to believe
were true heartfelt and meant for me.
Ahh but reality ever the cruel mistress
never fails to enlighten me, but I digress,
let me explain this finely composed mess
of pretty words spoken to deftly impress.
Ohh such is power of poets and bards
that we can manipulate the eager heart,
sweet words served up succulently a la cart,
professing feelings that leave only scars.
We think so little of the syllables said
after they vacate the mouth they have left.
Does anyone truly realize the weapon in the words?
To an ignorant mind it seems ridiculously absurd.
The truth is words injure, scar and assail,
they can be unforgiving for female or male;
indiscriminate attackers, their wounds never fail.
How could you author such a beastly tale?
We bleed our woes in ink across these pages,
describing it blow by blow or in injurious stages;
you climb upon your soap box versifying for all ages,
seeing a kindred in me, you fall into masculine messages.
You used your manly wiles to lull and seduce,
hypnotizing any and all with your word use;
it is cruel and obscene this cleverly created ruse,
careful lover, Karma is a bitch, one day it will be you!
Gypsy Red
Published 26th Sep 2012
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26th Sep 2012 4:17pm
A lovely write mommas. Brains humor and sweet, have to be one of my fav people here now. Xoxox
26th Sep 2012 4:31pm
Thanks G your sweet,glad you like it and thanks for adding me to your list!
Red
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26th Sep 2012 4:37pm
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26th Sep 2012 5:03pm
Well! Thank you Gabriel, soo happy that you are not like the rest.The truth is always better.
Red
Red
Anonymous
26th Sep 2012 5:01pm
Red~
"You used your manly wiles to lull and seduce,
hypnotizing any and all with your word use;
it is cruel and obscene this cleverly created ruse,
careful lover, Karma is a bitch, one day it will be you!"
~Yes, karma is a bitch and so very necessary...chaff weeding!
Strider
"You used your manly wiles to lull and seduce,
hypnotizing any and all with your word use;
it is cruel and obscene this cleverly created ruse,
careful lover, Karma is a bitch, one day it will be you!"
~Yes, karma is a bitch and so very necessary...chaff weeding!
Strider
I am sorry Strider this was not directed at you,I promise. I am not very good at hiding my feelings especially if I am hurt. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Red
Red
26th Sep 2012 9:42pm
I do the same Gypsy, I just have to express what is inside.
Great write and expression my dear.
Great write and expression my dear.
26th Sep 2012 11:11pm
Yes my dear I know you do passionate people are like that. Thank you very much sweet one.
Red
Red
26th Sep 2012 10:42pm
26th Sep 2012 11:25pm
Thank you! As I consider you sir an extremely well versed poet, it is an honor that you should find my so much to your liking.Thank you again
Red
Red
26th Sep 2012 10:59pm
Yes, I admire your ability to capture moments that affect you and share them through your writing.
26th Sep 2012 11:26pm
28th Sep 2012 9:48am
It is true. Poets disregard words and often string them together as a means to suck out desired emotions from readers, without ever truly reflecting on it once they're done.
Your poems, Gypsy, stand out of the clustered crowd of poems on DUP with a unique glow.
Why, because your pieces often has a case in point unlike that of the majority who just write, apparently, about absolutely nothing!- just drawing straws...
I have never for once regretted ever reading any of your poems(excluding the erotic ones. I don't read those)..
Enough said,
Brilliant piece. Keep it up, Gypsy woman!
Your poems, Gypsy, stand out of the clustered crowd of poems on DUP with a unique glow.
Why, because your pieces often has a case in point unlike that of the majority who just write, apparently, about absolutely nothing!- just drawing straws...
I have never for once regretted ever reading any of your poems(excluding the erotic ones. I don't read those)..
Enough said,
Brilliant piece. Keep it up, Gypsy woman!
The generosity and sincerity of your comment has touch and me I humbly thank you so very much, and may I say respect immensely your honesty about the erotic ones. I, like you, do not read the majority of those poems because I abore written crude pornography which is what most write, That said I can assure you I do not write that way, but there is no category for sensual or positive love poems, so I am forced to put them under that one, allow me to recommend one and you decide for yourself if it is to your liking:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/43112-whisperings-from-the-heart/
If you choose not to read it for moral/religious reasons, I totally understand and utterly respect your decision.
Thank you again for the wonderful comment.
Red
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/43112-whisperings-from-the-heart/
If you choose not to read it for moral/religious reasons, I totally understand and utterly respect your decision.
Thank you again for the wonderful comment.
Red
