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WHO KNEW
Who knew
On the 14th tomorrow would come and you would get the nerve to speak,
Watching me as I began to watch you
Who knew
On the 15th that talk of good sex
Would turn into months of a great relationship
Of course we have our ups & downs
But
Never loosing focus of spending all of my days loving you
Becoming faithful for all the right reasons
Couldn’t imagine hurting you in such a way
Who knew
On the 15th
I wouldn’t be able to live without you
Who knew
That I would love you so much
I couldn’t imagine life without your smile
On the 14th tomorrow would come and you would get the nerve to speak,
Watching me as I began to watch you
Who knew
On the 15th that talk of good sex
Would turn into months of a great relationship
Of course we have our ups & downs
But
Never loosing focus of spending all of my days loving you
Becoming faithful for all the right reasons
Couldn’t imagine hurting you in such a way
Who knew
On the 15th
I wouldn’t be able to live without you
Who knew
That I would love you so much
I couldn’t imagine life without your smile
Published 23rd Sep 2012
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2015 12:35pm
"Loosing" only needs 1 'o'
I did enjoy the questioning nature of this poem. I do wonder as a reader if you still think of this person, and how it turned out beyond the page. Thank you for the read.
I did enjoy the questioning nature of this poem. I do wonder as a reader if you still think of this person, and how it turned out beyond the page. Thank you for the read.
