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rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
we, nude
she, kneeling
me, in her mouth
she, a finger on her clitoris
me, slowly in and out
she, tongue working and finger stroking
me, hands tightly wound in her hair
she, squeezing my balls
me, pulling her head up to met my lips
she, pulling my head down to meet her lips
we, on knees
we, mouths meet
we, tongues touch
we, dripping with anticipation
me, pushing her back so that her butt cheeks are on her heels
she, back arched, hips raised, legs spread
me, legs straight, feet apart, arching over her
she, arms around my neck, pulling me down
me, hands by her head, supporting my weight
we, mouth to mouth
me, hard
she, wet
me, rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful --entering her wetness
she, lustful, nasty, dirty, uncivilized, rough --welcoming my hardness
we, fucking
we, rough
we, uncivilized
we, dirty
we, nasty
we, lustful
we, fucking
and, we, loving it
Written by
J_J_Jay_Jr
Published 21st Sep 2012
| Edited 12th Oct 2012
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Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
21st Sep 2012 9:53pm
A well written poem but the sentiment suggests that you are ashamed of enjoying sex whereas you should rejoice its glory.
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re: Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
1st Oct 2012 10:31pm
Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
22nd Sep 2012 9:27am
re: Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
1st Oct 2012 10:33pm
I had not intended an angry emotion. But I see what you are saying. It is good to have a poem read by another pair of eyes --filtered and interpreted by another thinking mind. Thank you.
Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
re: Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
27th Sep 2012 4:51pm
It certainly did. Thank you! I will read more of yours and see if I can do one for you.
Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
27th Sep 2012 4:55pm
Kinda had me like what,but then im like ok well damn intense moment nice write
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re: Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
1st Oct 2012 10:34pm
Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
11th Jan 2013 3:21pm
re: Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
21st Jan 2014 5:24pm
Now and then a session of rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful sex is just what is needed. As long as both are willing participants.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
I am beginning to look forward to your comments as a favorite part of my log in time here on DUP.)
Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
as I read yours slowly, slowly did mine rise... there is no surmise... in hand was my loving prize... standing by... as she opened her lower lips... and welcomed me
I entered her quickly ...lest the gates of heaven close upon me... ere I'd cum in ...she squeezed me, my long strong bulbous John with her tight lips ....and tickled my balls a bit... the serpent threatened her inside ...let me ride astride... don't hide... and then the hammering began... so suddenly..
Heavens took the life out of me.... as I was, as much as she, cooling off with her moans and my with-holds ....as wetness spread all humanly folds... I still inside weeping with joy ...she said hold it inside ...this loving toy...I still want more to ride...I sighed!
and stood beside let her have a smoother flooding ride ..that now couldn't but subside...
I entered her quickly ...lest the gates of heaven close upon me... ere I'd cum in ...she squeezed me, my long strong bulbous John with her tight lips ....and tickled my balls a bit... the serpent threatened her inside ...let me ride astride... don't hide... and then the hammering began... so suddenly..
Heavens took the life out of me.... as I was, as much as she, cooling off with her moans and my with-holds ....as wetness spread all humanly folds... I still inside weeping with joy ...she said hold it inside ...this loving toy...I still want more to ride...I sighed!
and stood beside let her have a smoother flooding ride ..that now couldn't but subside...
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re: Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
21st Jan 2014 5:25pm
re: re: Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
21st Jan 2014 7:40pm
all poets here
i read
don't see who is who
and by INSPIRATION
I compose
maybe ur were the one in this poem
glad u liked it too
thank u
will read more of u
i read
don't see who is who
and by INSPIRATION
I compose
maybe ur were the one in this poem
glad u liked it too
thank u
will read more of u
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Re: rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful
16th Apr 2014 5:29pm
me, rough, uncivilized, dirty, nasty, lustful --entering her wetness
she, lustful, nasty, dirty, uncivilized, rough --welcoming my hardness
that is just the purpose of a hard fuck
we all know and do and love it
she, lustful, nasty, dirty, uncivilized, rough --welcoming my hardness
that is just the purpose of a hard fuck
we all know and do and love it
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