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The end of poetry
The cat beneath my feet
Lays like a mat
I wonder if she realizes
That the end of poetry is near
Grandma cooked soup
Chicken soup of course
I wonder if she realizes
That the end of poetry is near
North Korea has the bomb
The south are reluctant to attack
I wonder if she realizes
That the end of poetry is near
He reads the signs and turns his back
At times not making a single dime
I wonder if he realizes
That the end of poetry is near
He shakes his fist to his God
Plays his guitar to the song
I wonder if he realizes
That the end of poetry is near
I wonder if he realizes
That the end of poetry is near
Lays like a mat
I wonder if she realizes
That the end of poetry is near
Grandma cooked soup
Chicken soup of course
I wonder if she realizes
That the end of poetry is near
North Korea has the bomb
The south are reluctant to attack
I wonder if she realizes
That the end of poetry is near
He reads the signs and turns his back
At times not making a single dime
I wonder if he realizes
That the end of poetry is near
He shakes his fist to his God
Plays his guitar to the song
I wonder if he realizes
That the end of poetry is near
I wonder if he realizes
That the end of poetry is near
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Re: The end of poetry
21st Sep 2012 00:28am
This poem lend a definition to the saying, "The storm really doesn't matter until the storm begin to get you down."
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Re: The end of poetry
21st Sep 2012 1:04am
Yes that's a good interpretation of the
end is nigh, much appreciated,
Ricecake
end is nigh, much appreciated,
Ricecake
Re: The end of poetry
21st Sep 2012 1:41am
re: Re: The end of poetry
21st Sep 2012 2:45am
Thank you and your cute pooch
for reviewing this poem,
I am really happy to meet
new poets and will read as well,
Kind rgs
Ricecake
for reviewing this poem,
I am really happy to meet
new poets and will read as well,
Kind rgs
Ricecake
Re: The end of poetry
21st Sep 2012 1:54am
I think we never know what tomorrow will bring. I think all things one time or another come to an end. Not always of our own demise. Nice write!! :)
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Re: The end of poetry
21st Sep 2012 2:47am
Thanks Flowergirl for thoughtful comments
And constructive ideas I appreciate!!!
Ricecake :)
And constructive ideas I appreciate!!!
Ricecake :)
Re: The end of poetry
25th Sep 2012 00:18am
I really like the repetition, it makes me wonder are we on the brink of something, the end of civilization, the end of poetry. Very nice ...
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Re: The end of poetry
25th Sep 2012 00:38am
Thanks Colonel
I like your avatAr
I must find me one soon!!
Apprec the read n comments!!
Kind regards
Ricecake
I like your avatAr
I must find me one soon!!
Apprec the read n comments!!
Kind regards
Ricecake
Re: The end of poetry
25th Sep 2012 00:50am
RC the end of poetry is not here yet, so long as we, the poets, keep it going and perpetuate it, it will endures like the mountain endures the storm!
Red
Red
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Re: The end of poetry
25th Sep 2012 1:06am
Gypsey I am in agreement cause
When I see your smile it's only
The beginning of poetry and
I ain't bring corny (I'm a Ricecake!)
Quite a few of my poems talk about
The end.... Girl I need a beginning!!
In hope
Ricecake :)
When I see your smile it's only
The beginning of poetry and
I ain't bring corny (I'm a Ricecake!)
Quite a few of my poems talk about
The end.... Girl I need a beginning!!
In hope
Ricecake :)
Re: The end of poetry
25th Sep 2012 1:07am