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community love
Dont really know what category this belongs in.
Niggaz want loyal pucci
But slangin community dick
They want the typa woman who work all day
And come str8 home to wait on him
The typa woman who got a good job
Nice crib,hair n nails stay did
What about him?
He the typa nigga who hug the block
u know the ones who act like they trap all day
Wearin a beater n tims
Grill stay shining pants dwn to his sockz
No rl job,cus he say work on the block
He dnt need a 9-5
But he want loyal pucci!!
So he can brag to his boys
About how u aint goin nowhere
Cus she dwn and only rydn wit you
But what does she have?
Just ah nigga who lies he true
And you know you my boo
I only love you
Fuck them bytches they dnt mean shyt
They only help my hustle and keep daddy pockets thick
But loyal you are!! Huh
Fuck the diseases,fuck the risks
He slangin dick to any low standard chick
And you remain tru
Why let him be the fountain of your youth
Are you tryna die quick?
You up worried about is he coming home to you
But he workin givin dick to every color and shape of
YOU!!!!!!!!
Niggaz want loyal pucci
But slangin community dick
They want the typa woman who work all day
And come str8 home to wait on him
The typa woman who got a good job
Nice crib,hair n nails stay did
What about him?
He the typa nigga who hug the block
u know the ones who act like they trap all day
Wearin a beater n tims
Grill stay shining pants dwn to his sockz
No rl job,cus he say work on the block
He dnt need a 9-5
But he want loyal pucci!!
So he can brag to his boys
About how u aint goin nowhere
Cus she dwn and only rydn wit you
But what does she have?
Just ah nigga who lies he true
And you know you my boo
I only love you
Fuck them bytches they dnt mean shyt
They only help my hustle and keep daddy pockets thick
But loyal you are!! Huh
Fuck the diseases,fuck the risks
He slangin dick to any low standard chick
And you remain tru
Why let him be the fountain of your youth
Are you tryna die quick?
You up worried about is he coming home to you
But he workin givin dick to every color and shape of
YOU!!!!!!!!
Published 20th Sep 2012
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20th Sep 2012 5:55am
It's really crazy to not know someone, then spend two or three minutes reading something written from the depths of their soul, and feel as if we are all part of something bigger than ourselves. Connected in ways not understood
I felt ya at the first line. And pretty pissed at your boo by the end. You have the ability to transport someone to a part of the world and a life they would never know or understand if it weren't for your poetry. Thank you.
I felt ya at the first line. And pretty pissed at your boo by the end. You have the ability to transport someone to a part of the world and a life they would never know or understand if it weren't for your poetry. Thank you.
20th Sep 2012 2:58pm
I am pretty sure a lot of women have gone thru this and I am pretty sure there is a man that can relate as well! I am feeling this on so many levels. I have somethings smiular that I wrote it actually was for me sister!
20th Sep 2012 8:29pm
I must confess having been removed from Los Angeles since junior high, at first some of the words you used were question marks for me. (figured it out with a bit more observation)
This actually reads like a rap Lil' Kim might be spinning back in the day...
This actually reads like a rap Lil' Kim might be spinning back in the day...
30th Dec 2012 2:28pm
Excellent job once again. I know you have alot of erotic and love poems (and they are very vivid pieces of art by the way) but I prefer your serious work. I like that you wrote this in the words that the speaker would use. If you have the time check out some of my songs. Peace and Tranquility
