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Don’t Give Up
Your life is to precious, you mean to much to ever think of truly giving up…
No matter the words or weapons used, stop take a deep breath
Love surrounds you…
All you have to do, is clear your thoughts of the pain that engulfs
Your spirit…
There is a helping hand to hold onto when things seem to hard to
Bear…
I know what pain can be caused by actions and what some perceive
As mere words…
You are special in so many ways don’t allow evil to take that away…
For those of you who have no clue, simply learn to observe and see
The warning signs…
Keep your mouth shut and listen for once, you could be the difference in
the life of someone put in your path…
People are in your life for a reason and if you’re to wrapped up in
Circumstance you could miss out on lessons meant to be learned
Before tragedy strikes and it’s to late…
Take the time now to reflect and you might just find there is someone
longing for that helping hand…
In Loving memory of Sami Jo, and many others who are now lessons for us
to be learned and no death is in vain…
Please people wake up open your hearts and minds to all that can
Be done to help others no matter the situation…
We need true communities back to the way they once were, lending
Your time to helping others simply because you can…
Please if you are suicidal don’t give up…
Love Surrounds You~!!!
No matter the words or weapons used, stop take a deep breath
Love surrounds you…
All you have to do, is clear your thoughts of the pain that engulfs
Your spirit…
There is a helping hand to hold onto when things seem to hard to
Bear…
I know what pain can be caused by actions and what some perceive
As mere words…
You are special in so many ways don’t allow evil to take that away…
For those of you who have no clue, simply learn to observe and see
The warning signs…
Keep your mouth shut and listen for once, you could be the difference in
the life of someone put in your path…
People are in your life for a reason and if you’re to wrapped up in
Circumstance you could miss out on lessons meant to be learned
Before tragedy strikes and it’s to late…
Take the time now to reflect and you might just find there is someone
longing for that helping hand…
In Loving memory of Sami Jo, and many others who are now lessons for us
to be learned and no death is in vain…
Please people wake up open your hearts and minds to all that can
Be done to help others no matter the situation…
We need true communities back to the way they once were, lending
Your time to helping others simply because you can…
Please if you are suicidal don’t give up…
Love Surrounds You~!!!
Published 18th Sep 2012
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18th Sep 2012 00:39am
18th Sep 2012 00:40am
No matter the words or weapons used, stop take a deep breath
Love surrounds you…
Ever so true!!! Great write, thank you.
Love surrounds you…
Ever so true!!! Great write, thank you.
You're most welcome...
I'm am so sick of seeing people die
because of the pain others inflict
mentally upon them...
Sami Jo was just 14 and because of
sick minded weak people torturing this
beautiful young lady, she committed suicide
over the weekend...
I'm am so sick of seeing people die
because of the pain others inflict
mentally upon them...
Sami Jo was just 14 and because of
sick minded weak people torturing this
beautiful young lady, she committed suicide
over the weekend...
18th Sep 2012 8:00am
Very profound and poignant. I can relate to this very much as three of my male family members committed suicide and two of my male friends, all of them because of their relationships with their partners breaking down. So sad.
A great thought provoking piece.
A great thought provoking piece.
18th Sep 2012 4:17pm
Hers too was from a relationship at
the sweet age of only 14 =/...So sorry
for your losses Magdalena,,,
the sweet age of only 14 =/...So sorry
for your losses Magdalena,,,
Anonymous
18th Sep 2012 9:50am
Very heartfelt Critical Mass.
Nicely done a reminder!
Strider
Nicely done a reminder!
Strider
18th Sep 2012 4:18pm
Thank you Strider...
Something we should
never need reminding
of is true compassion
for others period...
Very heartbreaking
indeed...
Something we should
never need reminding
of is true compassion
for others period...
Very heartbreaking
indeed...
18th Sep 2012 7:27pm
Great words to live by. Many could use these words in their time of need, or to reflect on later. Great positivity
19th Sep 2012 1:54am
19th Sep 2012 8:28pm
What's wrong with people hearts? What's wrong with with showing love and reaching out?
This was a powerful heartfelt poem Critical, it brought me to tears. I hope that others will read this and like a virus spread it around so that others will not take this road and perhaps do as you suggested reach out in love. I send my love to her family and to you her friend.
much love
G.
This was a powerful heartfelt poem Critical, it brought me to tears. I hope that others will read this and like a virus spread it around so that others will not take this road and perhaps do as you suggested reach out in love. I send my love to her family and to you her friend.
much love
G.
20th Sep 2012 8:56pm
Thank you so much Glynis...
So many hearts are breaking
at this tragic loss~!!!
People are so out of the
true meaning and realm of
love and it is so sad that
more and more people are
harboring hatred towards
others... Love is really
where all the answers in
life lay~!!!
Peace and Blessings
So many hearts are breaking
at this tragic loss~!!!
People are so out of the
true meaning and realm of
love and it is so sad that
more and more people are
harboring hatred towards
others... Love is really
where all the answers in
life lay~!!!
Peace and Blessings
