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How Some Die
I have been dead for the past 4 years.
The person you see is not who they appear.
I know you may see me, but im not here anymore.
My brain's all that's left and it's taken control.
It took control of my body, and my state of mind.
Yes it'll still be here when i'm out of time.
I'm not apart of that person who used to be,
Just a wandering soul in their place of dreams.
My brain has taken me, shot me in the trash bin.
It'll change my past life, so a new life begins.
The one who is talking, and introducing themselves.
Is a girl with "Amnesia" who needs "mental help."
But really it's the brain causing all the damage.
Reproducing it's cells to create a new personality.
But no one else knows and will never find out.
It's happened numerous times, you be careful now.
This has been a warning and the story of my death.
It wasn't a cancer, its your brain fighting back.
The person you see is not who they appear.
I know you may see me, but im not here anymore.
My brain's all that's left and it's taken control.
It took control of my body, and my state of mind.
Yes it'll still be here when i'm out of time.
I'm not apart of that person who used to be,
Just a wandering soul in their place of dreams.
My brain has taken me, shot me in the trash bin.
It'll change my past life, so a new life begins.
The one who is talking, and introducing themselves.
Is a girl with "Amnesia" who needs "mental help."
But really it's the brain causing all the damage.
Reproducing it's cells to create a new personality.
But no one else knows and will never find out.
It's happened numerous times, you be careful now.
This has been a warning and the story of my death.
It wasn't a cancer, its your brain fighting back.
Published 16th Sep 2012
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16th Sep 2012 5:27am
My favorite part is the ending I loved how you said " its not a cancer its your brain fighting back".
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1st Apr 2013 1:57pm
Great job. I've been wanting to write something from the perspective of a person who's already dead, but I'll stand down and let you have your thunder. ;)
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1st Apr 2013 7:18pm
Meep, thank you. >.< and you can write whatever perspective of a poem you want. I don't have any thunder. Just rain. x)
