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Wine and Inspiration.
I press the raz0r against my skin.
And fe3l the sting.
Red falls and mak3 pretty splashes.
And th3n I snap the cut with my rubber band.
Littl3 blood splashes around so cute.
... It'sjust fun tim3s.
And th3n I sip wine lik3 a poet who fl0ws
Then lay in my bed next t0 bloody notes.
Arms spread 0ut wide.
Feet together.
I sleep.
And fe3l the sting.
Red falls and mak3 pretty splashes.
And th3n I snap the cut with my rubber band.
Littl3 blood splashes around so cute.
... It'sjust fun tim3s.
And th3n I sip wine lik3 a poet who fl0ws
Then lay in my bed next t0 bloody notes.
Arms spread 0ut wide.
Feet together.
I sleep.
Published 10th Sep 2012
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What's with all the 3's and 0's? Jarred the flow. Imagery is your best friend. You could make your poems so much more beautiful with proper grammar and more eloquent verses. PM me if you have any concerns with this.
Good work never-the-less for a first attempt.
AlwaysCaliban
Good work never-the-less for a first attempt.
AlwaysCaliban
