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Vampire the buffy slayer
Slowly now they're slain,
Into my black embrace,
I take away their pain
but fill them with disgrace,
Most of them shake with fear,
Looking into my face,
My true nature will unfold,
Once we reach that other place.
far bayond, the seas of life divide,
The eyes inside the sky
seduces the night.
I dwell now only in the shadows,
the darkness being my solace,
no heartbeat thunpimg through the night,
death is the side affect of my bite
that can not be cured except by [font=Times New Roman][font=Times New Roman][font=Times New Roman][i]the turning,
better to lay them dow[i][i]n
and not let them feel the tortures of time,
am I impathetic,
or do I seek now to unburden my conscience,
the past behind?
Then again perhaps tonight I'll come for you,
my darling so unafraid,
for it is widely known,
that the passing's just a phase,
Or maybe you will come for me
with a wooden stake, which would also be grand
for I rather like suprises.
Once again as every other night, i'll either
drink my fill or be releaved of this life,
makes no nevermind to[/font] me,
no more angui[/font]sh, no more strife[/i][/font].
[/i][/i] Sabbath
Into my black embrace,
I take away their pain
but fill them with disgrace,
Most of them shake with fear,
Looking into my face,
My true nature will unfold,
Once we reach that other place.
far bayond, the seas of life divide,
The eyes inside the sky
seduces the night.
I dwell now only in the shadows,
the darkness being my solace,
no heartbeat thunpimg through the night,
death is the side affect of my bite
that can not be cured except by [font=Times New Roman][font=Times New Roman][font=Times New Roman][i]the turning,
better to lay them dow[i][i]n
and not let them feel the tortures of time,
am I impathetic,
or do I seek now to unburden my conscience,
the past behind?
Then again perhaps tonight I'll come for you,
my darling so unafraid,
for it is widely known,
that the passing's just a phase,
Or maybe you will come for me
with a wooden stake, which would also be grand
for I rather like suprises.
Once again as every other night, i'll either
drink my fill or be releaved of this life,
makes no nevermind to[/font] me,
no more angui[/font]sh, no more strife[/i][/font].
[/i][/i] Sabbath
Published 7th Sep 2012
| Edited 28th Oct 2012
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7th Sep 2012 7:13am
"Once again as every other night, i'll either
drink my fill or be releaved of this life,
makes no nevermind to me,
no more anguish, no more strife."
again powerful words that slay me :)
p.s. i think its "relieved" that you are going for there?
drink my fill or be releaved of this life,
makes no nevermind to me,
no more anguish, no more strife."
again powerful words that slay me :)
p.s. i think its "relieved" that you are going for there?
7th Sep 2012 7:38am
Actually that was a secret alluding to re as in again, leaved as in left, all i was saying with using that spelling was that he had already died once and now might experience it again. re-leave
I'm glad you took precious time to read it thanks, I've read quite a few of your poems and they're everyone of them filled with depth. Sabbath
I'm glad you took precious time to read it thanks, I've read quite a few of your poems and they're everyone of them filled with depth. Sabbath
7th Sep 2012 7:48am
ok i got it.. sorry m a sucker for spellings n all..
but i see it now the way you mean and its whole new verbiage for me.. don't know how many things i m going to learn.. so lucky i stumbled upon this site :)
but i see it now the way you mean and its whole new verbiage for me.. don't know how many things i m going to learn.. so lucky i stumbled upon this site :)
7th Sep 2012 10:30am
7th Sep 2012 10:05am
Wow I think this is the best yet. The flow, the feel.
Slowly now they're slain,
Into my black embrace,
I take away their pain
but fill them with disgrace,
Most of them shake with fear,
Looking into my face,
My true nature will unfold,
Once we reach that other place.
The picture clear and perfect
Slowly now they're slain,
Into my black embrace,
I take away their pain
but fill them with disgrace,
Most of them shake with fear,
Looking into my face,
My true nature will unfold,
Once we reach that other place.
The picture clear and perfect
7th Sep 2012 10:34am
7th Sep 2012 7:17pm
very well written i like the twist where the vampire does the slaying ... not buffy lol
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7th Sep 2012 7:35pm
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8th Sep 2012 9:32am
8th Sep 2012 5:14pm
I really am thankful to have such indept minds showing me the way thankyou all
Sabbath
Sabbath
