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Forever Yours
When the tide washed my pleas away
I cursed the blue and tranquil sea
And when my sleep brought a restless day
I cursed the night and I will be
Forever forlorn and forced to write
As my pen silently cries tonight
Of the beauty I have seen in my day
But non compares to you
And when I see a scene, I will stay
And curse the skies of blue
For a restless day can be under skies of gray
But blue skies will always stay, and be mine.
I cursed the blue and tranquil sea
And when my sleep brought a restless day
I cursed the night and I will be
Forever forlorn and forced to write
As my pen silently cries tonight
Of the beauty I have seen in my day
But non compares to you
And when I see a scene, I will stay
And curse the skies of blue
For a restless day can be under skies of gray
But blue skies will always stay, and be mine.
Published 25th Apr 2010
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Anonymous
29th Feb 2012 9:37am
This is a wonderful style here with a beatnik feel to it and a sense of purpose, but I feel sort of interrupted from the top and bottom styles seeming to change without a lot of fluidity.This kind of threw me and that's all I would suggest, thank you-very enjoyable.
19th Sep 2014 7:10pm
I thought this was nice but as miki said it was a bit chunky at times but over all very nice.
