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Failure
* excuse the grammitical mistakes but, im free styling*
I sit and I watch the sun raise to another day that reminds me I am no longer succeding in this life.
I can no longer see the light at the end of the tunnel, just the reminder of the guilt and shame.
There eyes watch me as I walk down the streets of the judgmental town,
no matter how hard i try to make them believe thats not me, i am slapped in the face with there fuck up annoucements, there bracelets to remind me how bad i am.
Bad mother, bad employee, shitty life.
How far can i fall into my cave of self pity, there is no rope, there is no light there is no air, i feel it clouding me.
From all this i feel like im breaking splitting into two with no name.
*hope this is ok. I tried*
I sit and I watch the sun raise to another day that reminds me I am no longer succeding in this life.
I can no longer see the light at the end of the tunnel, just the reminder of the guilt and shame.
There eyes watch me as I walk down the streets of the judgmental town,
no matter how hard i try to make them believe thats not me, i am slapped in the face with there fuck up annoucements, there bracelets to remind me how bad i am.
Bad mother, bad employee, shitty life.
How far can i fall into my cave of self pity, there is no rope, there is no light there is no air, i feel it clouding me.
From all this i feel like im breaking splitting into two with no name.
*hope this is ok. I tried*
Published 5th Sep 2012
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5th Sep 2012 5:08pm
Yea, you know sweetheart I don't think that we're destined to always feel this way, I happen to think that if we could see the world as it truely is, we wouldn't feel so jaded.because we'd realize that there's no normal world there's just the world, it's cruel an unforgiving, and unfair but eventually you realize that you're not nearly as screwed as most people,I mean we didn't get this way on our own.
Kick ass peom, especially just off the top of your head, I tell you what You write and I'll read. Sabbath
Kick ass peom, especially just off the top of your head, I tell you what You write and I'll read. Sabbath
6th Sep 2012 5:48am
