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declaration of love
oh little trembling bee
i am finely tuned in
(to your wavelength)
and turned on by
your swaying body
thus i announce my desire
little bee my heart racing
at your name's mention
pale faced and weak in the
knees (when you're near)
i love your sweet glances
with all the chances
we are taking while trying
to disguise our inclination
toward one another
oh my little honey bee
you seem to stare so curiously
you're my soul's happiness
and it's torment supreme
oh little trembling bee-
hover over me
i am finely tuned in
(to your wavelength)
and turned on by
your swaying body
thus i announce my desire
little bee my heart racing
at your name's mention
pale faced and weak in the
knees (when you're near)
i love your sweet glances
with all the chances
we are taking while trying
to disguise our inclination
toward one another
oh my little honey bee
you seem to stare so curiously
you're my soul's happiness
and it's torment supreme
oh little trembling bee-
hover over me
Published 3rd Sep 2012
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3rd Sep 2012 3:41pm
Nice smile this gives. Sweet and simple these bees seem, yet I marvel in their chemistry.
3rd Sep 2012 4:11pm
3rd Sep 2012 5:54pm
This is lovely poem and wonderful pen.
I learned some time ago that bees carry pollen on their legs and that is where the saying "Bees Knees" came from. I tend to pick up random information along the way. :)
I learned some time ago that bees carry pollen on their legs and that is where the saying "Bees Knees" came from. I tend to pick up random information along the way. :)
3rd Sep 2012 5:59pm
Thank you for your lovely comments. I always wondered where "Bees Knees" came from so I thank you for sharing your knowledge. :)
