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Women Are Evil
Women are evil
They make me bleed
Women are demons
Planting seeds inside of me
They hide their hate with love
Cover my eyes
I don't want to see
Oh how they prey upon me
Women are ice
Cold as steel
Freezing my body
I can no longer feel
Women are evil
Women are something
I want to open
But I can't break the seal
The evil is inside
Waiting for me to open
They are out there waiting
Waiting for me
Waiting for you
to open love
feels so real
Women are evil
They make me bleed
Women are demons
Planting seeds inside of me
They hide their hate with love
Cover my eyes
I don't want to see
Oh how they prey upon me
Women are ice
Cold as steel
Freezing my body
I can no longer feel
Women are evil
Women are something
I want to open
But I can't break the seal
The evil is inside
Waiting for me to open
They are out there waiting
Waiting for me
Waiting for you
to open love
feels so real
Women are evil
Published 1st Sep 2012
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Not all women are evil. But you have written a good poem about those that are. Here's my answer to your poem.
but sister
men-
they like to see us smile
no doubt, they want us
cheerful you say
but sister
if it isn't them
that push us toward
a joyless state
but sister
men-
they like to see us smile
no doubt, they want us
cheerful you say
but sister
if it isn't them
that push us toward
a joyless state
1st Sep 2012 10:44pm
6th Aug 2013 00:37am
