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anthropomorphian doggerel[love]
poomfoto:by:DaniKozkonFrA
ugust31,2012at4:25pm
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to thee beach
th'seaBeach theedge
of someWorld
[or an other ]
wit me br'other's
littleDawgie -[no human
womanicompanion
has yet t'dare
a c c ompany]
so
eachtime i'go to sea to stroll,roll,dive
underwave,
Alice'dawgie begins her
c h a n t soon as eye get
knee'deep.......
"come back", "don't go" "don't
do
it",
as if as if as if she could
k no w that part'o'Me
what wanna be'neath th'Sea
most
perm'nntly....
"come back",
"don't l e a v e me
here"---
o'babyDawg, aye'll keep comin'back
s'long as i h'ear ye
callin'
r e m inding
~~~~~dkzk31aug2012~~~~~~~~~
ugust31,2012at4:25pm
·
to thee beach
th'seaBeach theedge
of someWorld
[or an other ]
wit me br'other's
littleDawgie -[no human
womanicompanion
has yet t'dare
a c c ompany]
so
eachtime i'go to sea to stroll,roll,dive
underwave,
Alice'dawgie begins her
c h a n t soon as eye get
knee'deep.......
"come back", "don't go" "don't
do
it",
as if as if as if she could
k no w that part'o'Me
what wanna be'neath th'Sea
most
perm'nntly....
"come back",
"don't l e a v e me
here"---
o'babyDawg, aye'll keep comin'back
s'long as i h'ear ye
callin'
r e m inding
~~~~~dkzk31aug2012~~~~~~~~~
Published 31st Aug 2012
| Edited 1st Sep 2012
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Oh jeez! The simple sentimentality of this (I should be cautious of
anything with a dog) defines love for me. Paulson or someone else said
something like: "In my attempts to avoid cliché, I find I usually
end up avoiding the truth." Whatever; when it works for me,
I'm helpless. (Wonderful structure, picture, by the way.) On my reading list.
anything with a dog) defines love for me. Paulson or someone else said
something like: "In my attempts to avoid cliché, I find I usually
end up avoiding the truth." Whatever; when it works for me,
I'm helpless. (Wonderful structure, picture, by the way.) On my reading list.
1st Sep 2012 7:15pm
i kinda felted it 'corny' by my lofty standards, but, as i do wit near all my writs, it 'goes out' same as it 'sprouted' regardless'o what I-Think about'em.......
not very judicious for an
artist 40yrs into No Suc'cess
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not very judicious for an
artist 40yrs into No Suc'cess
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4th Sep 2012 11:38am
Read this poem a while ago and meant to come back for it.
You feel, think, so you write and that's how it should be. Uncontrollably uncontrived, and I love dogs. Got three hairy balls with teeth myself.
and yes, the picture is pretty cool too.
Cliche? All poetry has become that after centuries of everybody trying not to be cliche they kinda ruined it for us so fook 'em.
I'm taking this one too.
You feel, think, so you write and that's how it should be. Uncontrollably uncontrived, and I love dogs. Got three hairy balls with teeth myself.
and yes, the picture is pretty cool too.
Cliche? All poetry has become that after centuries of everybody trying not to be cliche they kinda ruined it for us so fook 'em.
I'm taking this one too.
4th Sep 2012 12:07pm
8th Sep 2012 4:03am
Yes I also have a soft spot (on my head) for doggies. I have an even softer spot for a doggerel that literally contains a doggie. I don't know how I messed and missed this one, but it is a fine little one. As above fellows said the strength is in the simplicity and honesty.
