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Ultimate Desire
Our eyes meet, one moment in a single glance, my knees feel weak, my body shivers, Hell, I don't stand a chance! Things tighten, I can feel that sweet sexy movement, a quiver. I knew if we touched, came together, I would be his, I wouldn't resist, he would take me, lost forever!
Of course, it happened I knew it would, he walked up to me took my hand, instantly my heart speeds, breaths quicken, his electricity flows through me, I am stunned and stricken, I feel my body react to the want in his eyes, my sex is ready, my panties are no longer dry.
He leads me outside, of course I follow, my pulse is so thick in my throat, I can barely even swallow. In one solid motion he lifts me, cradles me in his arms, I watch his smile, a sweet boyish charm.
We arrive at our destination, he eases me down, he says let's ride, I hop on with no hesitation, but I couldn't have denied him, even if I wanted or tried, curiosity takes over, I wanna know what this night has to offer, intends, I want to see every part, beginning, middle, and end!
The ride is thrilling yet peaceful, as I hold him, I can feel our energy building silent but needful. Again my heart races as we come to a stop, my surroundings are quiet, secluded, a long way from any town or shop.
We slide off his bike, I am fully aware that we are alone, as he leans into kiss me, my temperature spikes!
I give into his lips, mold mine to his, my mind is a cloud, only thought I can hear is: "put your hand on what lies between his hips!" Nibbling, kissing, undressing. His hand between my legs, rubbing, gently caressing.
My body is consumed by want and aching, I am already on the verge of breaking. I turn around, giving him my back, as he bends me over gently, grinning and teasing, deciding his entry and passionate attack!
When that moment comes and he fulfills me, my body is ready, bringing me quickly, my sweet juices spill. I convulse with each thrust, pure ecstasy, licking his fingers the sweet taste of me, sucking as a cry out " Oh yes please Fuck me"
As he listens to my moans and pleas, I feel his body tense inside me, He pounds, his pace gets faster, drawling me closer, "Oh mmm yes harder!" He says I can't hold on much longer, "I say cum for me" his eyes glaze with bliss and wonder.
We collapse on the bike, as he releases inside me, I feel connected easy to entice. Both exhausted like a burning flame in a fire! Now I know what it feels like to be ruled by power, the pure raw essence of ultimate desire!
Of course, it happened I knew it would, he walked up to me took my hand, instantly my heart speeds, breaths quicken, his electricity flows through me, I am stunned and stricken, I feel my body react to the want in his eyes, my sex is ready, my panties are no longer dry.
He leads me outside, of course I follow, my pulse is so thick in my throat, I can barely even swallow. In one solid motion he lifts me, cradles me in his arms, I watch his smile, a sweet boyish charm.
We arrive at our destination, he eases me down, he says let's ride, I hop on with no hesitation, but I couldn't have denied him, even if I wanted or tried, curiosity takes over, I wanna know what this night has to offer, intends, I want to see every part, beginning, middle, and end!
The ride is thrilling yet peaceful, as I hold him, I can feel our energy building silent but needful. Again my heart races as we come to a stop, my surroundings are quiet, secluded, a long way from any town or shop.
We slide off his bike, I am fully aware that we are alone, as he leans into kiss me, my temperature spikes!
I give into his lips, mold mine to his, my mind is a cloud, only thought I can hear is: "put your hand on what lies between his hips!" Nibbling, kissing, undressing. His hand between my legs, rubbing, gently caressing.
My body is consumed by want and aching, I am already on the verge of breaking. I turn around, giving him my back, as he bends me over gently, grinning and teasing, deciding his entry and passionate attack!
When that moment comes and he fulfills me, my body is ready, bringing me quickly, my sweet juices spill. I convulse with each thrust, pure ecstasy, licking his fingers the sweet taste of me, sucking as a cry out " Oh yes please Fuck me"
As he listens to my moans and pleas, I feel his body tense inside me, He pounds, his pace gets faster, drawling me closer, "Oh mmm yes harder!" He says I can't hold on much longer, "I say cum for me" his eyes glaze with bliss and wonder.
We collapse on the bike, as he releases inside me, I feel connected easy to entice. Both exhausted like a burning flame in a fire! Now I know what it feels like to be ruled by power, the pure raw essence of ultimate desire!
Published 26th Aug 2012
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26th Aug 2012 9:17am
26th Aug 2012 9:32am
No, the piece is fine. You will see that much of the overt, graphic "erotica" is read by many, commented by few.
For me, it becomes redundant and blase. Perhaps in one on one sharing it is exciting but here it is so frequent many of us have become inoculated to the primal words.
Creativity and painting with words where our minds work a bit to SEE the visual is much more alluring. Keep writing and be patient. A lot of amazing poets here. Welcome to the family.
For me, it becomes redundant and blase. Perhaps in one on one sharing it is exciting but here it is so frequent many of us have become inoculated to the primal words.
Creativity and painting with words where our minds work a bit to SEE the visual is much more alluring. Keep writing and be patient. A lot of amazing poets here. Welcome to the family.
26th Aug 2012 9:36am
I see, well thank you for your honesty.. I have others to share as well... if you have a moment i would love your opinion on my other piece as well! Thank you again!
