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bye
the days dark
this one more than the last
i gave it my all
but i musent be good enoff
goodbye my love
goodbye my world
goodbye you strange people
i can't do this anymore
i don't want to fight this pain
this is how i always expected it to end
i gave it my all
but i'm never good enoff
this one more than the last
i gave it my all
but i musent be good enoff
goodbye my love
goodbye my world
goodbye you strange people
i can't do this anymore
i don't want to fight this pain
this is how i always expected it to end
i gave it my all
but i'm never good enoff
Published 25th Aug 2012
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25th Aug 2012 4:57pm
25th Aug 2012 5:02pm
26th Aug 2012 1:44am
26th Aug 2012 1:43pm
Good way of writing, I can see the feeling here, but I know I haven't metnioned before, but you have some serious spelling errors, if you want I can help you with that, buddy. :)
27th Aug 2012 00:47am
