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Dear Sadist
Ass black and blue
Now each step I take renders thoughts of you.
The sting of your hand makes me feel alive
Can’t erase the thought of your tongue flicking up my wet thighs
Now you’ve faded away like the purple of my flesh
The healing hurts like a bitch because I love how we meshed
You brought it all to an end before it could even start
No more broken capillaries for me, just a broken heart
Now each step I take renders thoughts of you.
The sting of your hand makes me feel alive
Can’t erase the thought of your tongue flicking up my wet thighs
Now you’ve faded away like the purple of my flesh
The healing hurts like a bitch because I love how we meshed
You brought it all to an end before it could even start
No more broken capillaries for me, just a broken heart
Published 20th Aug 2012
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21st Aug 2012 7:01am
10th Sep 2012 00:10am
21st Aug 2012 9:52pm
I really like this! Each line is so effective. Pleasure, pain and heartbreak all in one...I can definitely empathize. Can't wait to read more of your work!
25th Aug 2012 9:28pm
Very nice, I like it! Isn't that lingering reminder so very, very nice. Too bad it eventually goes away ... then it's time for another rendez-vous!
3rd Sep 2012 8:24am
Mark, I think we have another kindred spirit here! She can't post another poem to soon for me!
10th Sep 2012 00:07am
10th Sep 2012 00:10am
Why thank you! New to this forum, but I am very excited to get more involved and post more of my stuff. Sounds like we might have a bit in common. Excited to check out some of your work :)
10th Sep 2012 1:13am
Here are a few of my kinkier selections you might enjoy ...
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/66519-our-loves-duality/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/66471-over-your-leather-knee/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/65682-reflections-of-a-tortured-submissive/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/65055-submissive-bliss/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/64325-velvety-darkness/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/64198-i-take-your-breath-away/
Please let me know what you think
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/66519-our-loves-duality/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/66471-over-your-leather-knee/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/65682-reflections-of-a-tortured-submissive/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/65055-submissive-bliss/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/64325-velvety-darkness/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/64198-i-take-your-breath-away/
Please let me know what you think
