Your opinions stink and so does your breath

                              
When did your views give license to criticize?          
a know-it-all hiding insecurities with a guise
just who the fuck are you to try and tell me?!
your remark reeks of ignorance and jealousy!
think you're so perfect at everything you do?
you really should worry how others see you!
opinions are pointless when said out of spite
worthless words from the moronically uptight
so go right ahead and say what you want to say
your brainless thoughts only amuse me anyway!                      
                     
                     
                     
                     
                     
                     
                     
               
               
               
               
               
               
               
               
               
Author's footnote, 6/4/12                      
For the past several months I have been stalked by an ex g.f. who has logged on DUP with eight different screen names...she's a relentless web stalker. I come here to write my thoughts. No names are ever mentioned in any of my poems. However,she leaves slanderous comments in my poem's comment boxes...some of her remarks even mentioned my family and friends by name. When I block her she just logs on as a new member with a new screen name.Right now she's using the screen names 'Reanimate' and 'letitgo'...yeah,she really should. I have actually deleted over fifty poems because of her....twice! But I did save them the second time I deleted them and put them in my drafts along with all the comments,likes,reads,etc. The poems that I did not delete are how I feel about this psycho web stalker/ex g.f. In a few of my poems you can read the comments she posted under her latest bogus screen names. I'm now re-posting the deleted poems...along with any comments that were posted by others.                      
                     
                     
                     
Written by FED UP (13blueyes13)                          
Published 30th July 2012 10:56am  Last modified 31st July 2012 3:37pm                      
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Read Poems by dolphingal                      
Written on 30th July 2012 2:59pm by dolphingal                      
Well said my friend!!                    
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Written on 30th July 2012 10:24pm by FED UP                        
Thank you...much appreciated                    
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Written on 31st July 2012 12:04pm by Sofie                      
Of course the message of the work is great, but I also really like the way it was written...I almost found myself singing it aloud instead of reading it, ha!                    
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Written on 31st July 2012 12:07pm. Last modified on 31st July 2012 12:08pm by FED UP                        
Thank you...I'm truly flattered!                    
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Written on 31st July 2012 3:40pm by lucid                      
You tell em' Mike....another great one!                    
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Written on 31st July 2012 9:26pm. Last modified on 31st July 2012 9:27pm by FED UP                        
Thank you again....it just feels so good to tell someone off when they deserve it so this write is fitting for those spiteful "critics"...like they're any better than anyone,right? Next time one of you is harshly critiqued,feel free to use this poem!