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porcelain doll
her cheeks are as red as a rose
her skin is soft and smells sweet
her eyes as blue as the sea
the long black lushis hair flows beatifully with her genuine corset
a flowerly patter soft as silk
black and red ribbons criss crossing her body in every direction
her black and white stockings fit perfect on her legs
and she a doll
her skin is soft and smells sweet
her eyes as blue as the sea
the long black lushis hair flows beatifully with her genuine corset
a flowerly patter soft as silk
black and red ribbons criss crossing her body in every direction
her black and white stockings fit perfect on her legs
and she a doll
Published 12th Apr 2010
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14th Apr 2010 10:46pm
The first three lines are way too cliché to really hold attention, however the next four are very good. Personally I would drop those first three all together and instead concentrate on creating a much stronger ending.
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