Let's make love

Haha thanks . But I like that line. It's actually my favorite. Everyone should forget in someone right? Or that may just be me again who knows lol. Anyways thankyou

awesome, good write

Thank you

Lol if only thanks

Free Falling is the perfect cure sometimes.  No connections, no ties........feed your physical needs and end it all with a smile.  Sometimes Ms. Gg, a spine bending, mind bending fuck is all that's needed to give one perspective.  This brother is in total agreement with you here......

"Sex does a body good!" >:-)

It does . Agree :-)

Ms.gg, well at first I thought the heartless bitch line stuck out as a tad jolting compared to the weight of the rest of the wording,but its a genuine question your asking yourself- and the answer,trust that the partner here is making out ok....sooo, dug the concept of a meaningful sexual encounter without the baggage of love,seems to me vastly different than fucking someone ragged on purely animal urge(good enough sometimes) but I think the lines" lets make love without the love" is communicating an interesting space between the animal fuck function and the soul union of the "in love"

Right. Sometimes people want the connection the feelings without It meaning anything . Raw fuck is good. But sometimes slow and sensual is way better. Thank you light

Now, THIS is what I'm talking about from you! Natural.

Yes more laid back. Thanks

Roof of the car...bring it on :)

Haha roof hood same difference

No, I like the roof. Hoods are common, a roof is decadent. lol

Yea true . And we can put a dent in the roof :-) Ty ken

You definitely made love to the sheet of paper this was written on, because its sweet girl!! Good job enjoyed!

Lol Ty :-) the papers dry promise

Empty

Do you have Facebook? I can't do this on my poem lol

Your message was clear and refreshing. This seems more like prose than traditional poetry. That's not a bad thing by any means. Hell, Bukowski wrote great prose poetry so you are in good company.

Frankie

Thanks I think lol

I think poetry has a way to release that built up energy in us all.

So with the spent force how you feel now?

Free......hahahahahahahhahahahahaha.
Then good.

Lol yes thanks

We should make love lol

Lol sorry I think you're way to young

Well, BFF, I commend you keeping it real by omitting all the blahblah that goes into love.  No, I don't think your MC is being a bitch about what she wants and not giving anything.  Who's not to say that she has given alot and not gotten anything in return?  All is fair in Love and War!  And remember, Bitches aren't born, they're made!  CheersXOXO!!

And that's why I wuv you boo :-)

I would love to make love without abandone and strings attached like you've described..yummy thought thank you peace Crim xoxoxo

Yw And Ty

Great write.
Ahah if only the brakeman turns your way.

Brakeman? Ty :-)

This was amazing. Like extra sensual and honest. Somehow I think this would feel so raw and full of passion if it was to actually happen. Like you say you don't want love but if you giving love you're going to get it back. Love it though.

Thank you! And that's just it I don't give it. And don't want it back! Glad you enjoyed it.