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The Shadows that Haunt Me

I wish you can see what I’m forced to see. I wish you can hear what I’m forced to hear. I wish you could see the shadows that haunt me. The shadows that drown me in fear. Feel those cold blast of air, that tell you their near. Hear their tortuous screams fill the night air. Hear their voice whisper you name into your ear. Hearing and feeling their pain.  Seeing their shadows walk toward me, knowing running won’t help. Having unseen fingers trail down your arm. Sending Goosebumps upon your skin. Having their breath blow on your face, smelling of decay.  

Do you think it needs a better ending? I'm stuck, do you mind giving me a hand?
Written by Pepper
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