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I See
As I look in its eyes I see a web full of lies. I see the darkness in its heart. I see the demon living inside. I see the secrets it hides, pulled in by the dark. I see how much blood shed to feel nothing at all. Just for a moment the eyes soften and sadness washes over its face. I see it has been taught no love only hate. As the creature’s eyes slowly lift back to mine, I get jolted awake. For the creature I see is just the reflection of me.
Published 3rd Aug 2012
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3rd Aug 2012 4:00pm
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3rd Aug 2012 4:07pm
3rd Aug 2012 4:32pm
This poem is wonderful in a very dark way. I've felt like that so many times...it's great to know somebody understands
3rd Aug 2012 4:37pm
3rd Aug 2012 4:41pm
"I see has how much blood shed to feel nothing at all."
This is the only line I found troubling; maybe an edit to take out "has"?
Other than that - Awesome! One for the list.
This is the only line I found troubling; maybe an edit to take out "has"?
Other than that - Awesome! One for the list.
3rd Aug 2012 4:44pm
