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Rain, Rain
Rain, rain come my way wash away all the pain, make me new, make me fresh, make me the kind of person you’ll never want to forget, kissed by the rain that crashes on my face, swimming with the tears that blend in with the rain. The thunder rolls making my screams unheard, the anger of the lighting burns like the fire within my soul.
I'm not really sure about this one. Does it make sense?
I'm not really sure about this one. Does it make sense?
Published 3rd Aug 2012
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Anonymous
3rd Aug 2012 1:43pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Aug 2012 11:29pm
3rd Aug 2012 9:47pm
although i like it i'm not sure about the ending. that being said I can't really tell you what I would do to fix it neither. YES it does makesence, very nice. guess ishouldn't have fixed what i should have said is change..keep it th way it is.
3rd Aug 2012 10:12pm
4th Aug 2012 3:40am
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