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"Habibi ya nour el-ain" My darling, you are the light in my eyes
Written by
marielavoue
(Gypsy Red)
Published 30th Jul 2012
| Edited 2nd Aug 2012
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Re: "Habibi ya nour el-ain" My darling, you are the light in
30th Jul 2012 4:18pm
Some of the worlds most beautiful poetry is in Arabic enjoy; This song by Ishtar and The Gypsy Kings Inspired this piece.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GqQZ8FM-YH0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GqQZ8FM-YH0
Re: "Habibi ya nour el-ain" My darling, you are the light in
30th Jul 2012 4:56pm
Such depth and grandeur, a most lyrical majestic piece … (They say when the Scirocco blows you have to batten down your tent or else the sand gets everywhere!)
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re: Re: "Habibi ya nour el-ain" My darling, you are the light in
30th Jul 2012 4:58pm
Yes sir every orifice and crack gets a sand kiss, its not very nice. lolol Thanks for the comment happy you liked it.
Re: "Habibi ya nour el-ain" My darling, you are the light in
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2012 6:05pm
30th Jul 2012 6:04pm
Beautiful, well done...I went there with your words RED!
Nice poem.
Strider :)
Nice poem.
Strider :)
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re: Re: "Habibi ya nour el-ain" My darling, you are the light in
30th Jul 2012 6:06pm
So glad I took you on a trip, It is mysteriously beautiful. Thanks for the great comment Strider.
My darling, you are the light in my eyes
30th Jul 2012 7:19pm
re: My darling, you are the light in my eyes
30th Jul 2012 7:22pm
Yes the image is very true to life, I thought is would fit this piece perfectly.
Glad you liked Magda.
Red
Glad you liked Magda.
Red
Re: "Habibi ya nour el-ain" My darling, you are the light in
30th Jul 2012 9:18pm
My goodness...you have an ability to transform a person from where they are to where you want to take them....exsquistily done
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re: Re: "Habibi ya nour el-ain" My darling, you are the light in
30th Jul 2012 9:25pm
Thank you, thank you sweets! Yes I was trying transport the readers and I am delighted it worked. Thanks for the great comment!
Red
Red
Re: "Habibi ya nour el-ain" My darling, you are the light in
1st Aug 2012 1:00am