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Against The Brick Wall
Locked out;
Behind the brick wall
Lies the softest person I've ever met
Calm and gentle
Brilliant and beautiful
Everything a gentleman can desire
A woman with a little fire
But she won't let me in
Inside her mind,body and soul
Where I dream to be
And I can't see
The things I long to see
In the lady I feel was made for me
Silently I scheme and sort
Avenues to make real my thoughts
Modify my ways and resort
To calling and wooing nonstop
But everytime I try
Everytime again I fall
There's no access for me
My yearnings hit against the brick wall
Behind the brick wall
Lies the softest person I've ever met
Calm and gentle
Brilliant and beautiful
Everything a gentleman can desire
A woman with a little fire
But she won't let me in
Inside her mind,body and soul
Where I dream to be
And I can't see
The things I long to see
In the lady I feel was made for me
Silently I scheme and sort
Avenues to make real my thoughts
Modify my ways and resort
To calling and wooing nonstop
But everytime I try
Everytime again I fall
There's no access for me
My yearnings hit against the brick wall
Published 30th Jul 2012
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1st Aug 2012 9:42pm
often brick walls are created as a reaction to things that went before. Of course that also means that the person on the inside can't get out as well!
This is so applicable to the human story.
This is so applicable to the human story.
2nd Aug 2012 10:47am
Jazz I must commend your deep insight,you just got a graps of the angle I did not well articulate in this poem. For truly a time cometh when the person inside longs to come out but finds himself/herself a captive of her own principles. Thanks Jazz
