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Re: Too Late...
29th Jul 2012 00:43am
A thrilling horror of a fairground ride and yet I feel a smidgeon hard upon the inner self?
Any day we grant those spectres of the past THAT POWER of free will to infiltrate without a by your leave, to taint our dearest harmony of basic human wish - to live anew in purity each brand new day without the shadows of the past.
Hmm .. I fear I pontificate too much,yet only such a powerhouse write might move your readers so?
Any day we grant those spectres of the past THAT POWER of free will to infiltrate without a by your leave, to taint our dearest harmony of basic human wish - to live anew in purity each brand new day without the shadows of the past.
Hmm .. I fear I pontificate too much,yet only such a powerhouse write might move your readers so?
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re: Re: Too Late...
29th Jul 2012 00:55am
It is ok, from you my dearest friend I expect only light and butterflies, bunnies and sunshine. Never should my darkness touch your soul. Thank you for the comment. always a smile.
Re: Too Late...
Anonymous
29th Jul 2012 10:41am
I enjoyed this fiery dark place Red.
Nice write.
Thanks.
Strider :)
Nice write.
Thanks.
Strider :)
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re: Re: Too Late...
29th Jul 2012 1:57pm
Something a little different, I was in a dark foul mood and this is what came out. Glad you stopped by to read, thanks.
Red
Red
Too Late...
29th Jul 2012 2:05pm
It feels good to release, I've done it many times, some are quite brutal, needs must.
A great vent here. :)
A great vent here. :)
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re: Too Late...
29th Jul 2012 2:15pm
You Know Magda you are probably the only person that understood what this was, and you are absolutely correct it is cathartic. Thanks for the great comment.
re: re: Too Late...
29th Jul 2012 2:24pm
My pleasure Gypsy.
It is probably because I can relate so well. I wrote one called "Madness" my most favourite out of my vent poems, I will dig it out and post it.
It is probably because I can relate so well. I wrote one called "Madness" my most favourite out of my vent poems, I will dig it out and post it.
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re: re: re: Too Late...
29th Jul 2012 3:42pm
Re: Too Late...
30th Jul 2012 11:31pm
WOW.... chilling to the bone...yet I feel akinship to the expressions of the she demon...
I have felt and still do feel this same way at times...
I have felt and still do feel this same way at times...
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re: Re: Too Late...
30th Jul 2012 11:44pm
Yes, I was in a dark mood and very angry. But like you I feel many women can relate. Thanks for the comment.
Red
Red
Re: Too Late...
re: Re: Too Late...
23rd Sep 2012 3:22pm
I was! hahaha thanks for the complement I WILL take it, glad you could relate and enjoy my piece.
Red
Red