drowning

for a while, Nathan, this reminds me of a true story I read about a couple who attempted to drown themselves because they could no longer care for their severely backwards daughter. Such a beautiful piece, finely carved and tearful, and imbued with a dark kind of love few poets achieve.

thanks jack.. yeah recently not all of my poetry hasn't been hitting the mark.. at least for me.. I went through and picked out the best of my "angry poems" for now for the book "my fucked up words.. 30 out of 50 really hit the mark for me.. weird true story.. when I was writing it I could hear a little bit of tool's song flood if you've ever heard of it.. which also deals with water and drowning.. actually the whole album or most of it "undertow" had a water theme.. probably why they called it undertow

this one just pulls me into its depths, lovely liquid, and dark love poem, as engulfing as heady waterkill.

relax.. let go.. trust me.. and be engulfed by the words.. that's what they're there for :)

This carries itself just like the sea...like rolling waves of reassurance and comfort. I can just imagine that last big dive...

I'm reassured and comforted every time I think of that time I was in the void.. that last dive will be enchanting and overwhelming.. can't wait to see you there..