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Alien Cemetary
in THIS Expanse
the sheep
deal in expense
lost in the maze
of contrived density
slathered over and over
by primal greed
in all its intensity
century times century
I float here
adrift in alien cemetary
where souls go to die
long before biology
treading headstones
rubbing their shoulders
I never feel
as if these are my borders
what was that itch
that couldnt be matched
with another Spirit
why constantly detached?
ignorance is bliss
personally, i was never able to enjoy this
ancestral molecules
grasping at straws
building upon those straws Laws
to serve one cause
a sleight of hand
mutated diversion
from the TRUTH
that ALL are entitled Excursion
NONE should be served
ALL should be burdened
by self-determination
not enslavement
by culture
or amortization
not dragged down
by "civilization'
Hailed if born Tudor
Cursed if born Hatian
Published 25th Jul 2012
| Edited 13th Aug 2012
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2012 4:24am
A shameu we can't see dignity in each other drivel.
Everyone has a rightful place!
Strider :)
Everyone has a rightful place!
Strider :)
25th Jul 2012 4:29am
25th Jul 2012 5:42am
Still the way of the world and probably always will be.
A great write and expression here.
A great write and expression here.
25th Jul 2012 5:56am
Thank you Very much for your encouraging comments and taking the time to read Ms. M.
25th Jul 2012 6:26am
demonic,yet you are very right about death
if im getting the meaning right
if im getting the meaning right
25th Jul 2012 6:31am
Denka --- sometimes I write very cryptically,
very hiding --this makes it wide open for Readers
interpretation. You felt Literal Death from
this piece.
I meant the "Death" as more about Death of
Spirit while trapped within Society`s thin margins.
Both of us are "right" --- thank you for reading.
26th Jul 2012 1:28am
I have to admit, your poem has actually got me thinking about these things more seriously now.
26th Jul 2012 1:56am
(Written by Riiah
I have to admit, your poem has actually got me thinking about these things more seriously now.)
Wow Riiah --- thats about the highest praise any
writer can get. Im humbled --- thank you : > )
I have to admit, your poem has actually got me thinking about these things more seriously now.)
Wow Riiah --- thats about the highest praise any
writer can get. Im humbled --- thank you : > )
10th Sep 2012 00:48am
Brilliant and well written. I love your line, ignorance is bliss,personally I was never able to enjoy this "
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10th Sep 2012 1:14am
bliss --
thanks -- its a line , with variations I use a bit too much, haha
thank you so much for checking it out --
thanks -- its a line , with variations I use a bit too much, haha
thank you so much for checking it out --
