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Submissive Givers
consenting ventures
dripped rivulets of pleasure
from every concievable source
to every concievable receptor
beneficiaries sin-sate in revelry
submissive givers, obliging anomalies
humans sacrifice luscious parfait
orchestral immoral oral ballet
Pherominal Flavah, Cascading Caress
Missionary Visions, Heaven Scent
willing Spirits lock, enmesh
on booty maximus oil spread
this brew sublime, Our daily grind
One in front, One behind
carnal Phoenix flight succeeds
wall crawlers writhe in stunned release
Lovers melt in one another
give thanks there's Sunday to recover
scar spangled, intellects entangled
Bodies in Tune, Souls blissfully mangled
Published 25th Jul 2012
| Edited 22nd Feb 2013
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2012 3:25am
Everybody is hot tonight drivel!
Strider. :)
Strider. :)
25th Jul 2012 3:28am
It`s all Rachel O's Fault!
anyone who has read this be all "Mind-Messed"
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/61572-never-to-have-loved-at-all/
anyone who has read this be all "Mind-Messed"
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/61572-never-to-have-loved-at-all/
Anonymous
25th Jul 2012 4:22am
Yes, I understand now!
Strider :)
Strider :)
25th Jul 2012 4:21am
Wow, that is very sensual, I love it.
And what a compliment that you were inspired by something I wrote.
Very awesome!
And what a compliment that you were inspired by something I wrote.
Very awesome!
25th Jul 2012 4:27am
Anonymous
25th Jul 2012 6:52pm
Rachel was a good muse....
Hot and lovely poem
Hot and lovely poem
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