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BOOM
Boom.
A drop of blood hits the ground,
Boom.
A girl hits the wall,
Boom.
She embraces the ground,
Boom.
A blood-curdling scream,
Boom.
A sinister laugh of infliction,
Boom.
A tear trickles down her cheek
Boom.
Her eyes close and breathe ends
Boom.
No more fear the end is near,
Boom.
The final blow is here,
Boom.
A drop of blood hits the ground,
Boom.
A girl hits the wall,
Boom.
She embraces the ground,
Boom.
A blood-curdling scream,
Boom.
A sinister laugh of infliction,
Boom.
A tear trickles down her cheek
Boom.
Her eyes close and breathe ends
Boom.
No more fear the end is near,
Boom.
The final blow is here,
Boom.
Published 21st Jul 2012
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19th Nov 2013 12:39pm
well done, I think the hard punctuation of the 'boom' makes this feel like a slow motion nightmare set to the sound of a pounding heart.
22nd Nov 2013 5:30am
thank you, im glad you noticed the punctuation, it was very important to convey the idea
