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Dancing on your clitoris
I got styles baby and I move like a snake
My heart feels good when your legs are wide spread
I watch that beautiful pussy dripping wet
Damn!my dick must terrorize that sensitive cute place
That’s why I cant wait I undress your sexy dress
I must lick your skin as I bite your nipples and breasts
I let you masturbate with your dildo then I finger fuck that pussy myself
I see you turned on and need to be fucked in the worst way
So I have to put my hungry dick in your smooth pussy to be fed…
Lady, you are my best fucking whore of all time
As u bend over on the sofa, your beauty is sexy ripe fine
I’m amazed how you lick my hard dick with pride
You know my recipe, I fuck you to moan, after that you smile
Lady I see you enjoying my fucking,believe me kissing you feels nice
So lets do this romance one more time
Let my dick fly in your pussy inside…
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20th Jul 2012 3:10pm
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20th Jul 2012 3:22pm
Re: Dancing on your clitoris
20th Jul 2012 4:07pm
You flow a lot like T-Pain and Akon. Your words read like a translation from a different language but very effectively and definitely appeals to the exotic in a lady man. You've got this way you change up your rhythm midstream that causes the reader to follow your words closely. Hardcore, to the point, you are "the wetter". I dig where you coming from...write on!
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20th Jul 2012 4:13pm
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Anonymous
20th Jul 2012 5:29pm
JAITO,
For being blunt and hitting it hard right out of the gate - You are the Man! As far as constructive criticium I would offer, don't let the rhyme dictate to you. Keep it flowing naturally and you'll be the one on top. Enjoyed.
tornado
For being blunt and hitting it hard right out of the gate - You are the Man! As far as constructive criticium I would offer, don't let the rhyme dictate to you. Keep it flowing naturally and you'll be the one on top. Enjoyed.
tornado
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20th Jul 2012 6:55pm
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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2012 8:39pm
Jaito, you bring a new meaning to the word "Clitoris". . .nice write;)
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