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Gently Falling
This goes beyond opening up enough to look into her eyes
this is about closing them & trusting her like she is wise
Love is like new sight.
counting freckles & beauty marks we never noticed before
…admiring scars like bows on a gift from God..decor
Find yourself kissing her shoulders & forehead more than her lips
Lose your words & she knows you well enough to finish your sentence like you had a script…
this is about closing them & trusting her like she is wise
Love is like new sight.
counting freckles & beauty marks we never noticed before
…admiring scars like bows on a gift from God..decor
Find yourself kissing her shoulders & forehead more than her lips
Lose your words & she knows you well enough to finish your sentence like you had a script…
Published 20th Jul 2012
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20th Jul 2012 2:07am
Love most powerful ---- where nothing need be said, its understood. Good to have somethingnewfrom you....
20th Jul 2012 2:10am
Got a new job crazy hours. I'm super tired when I get home, so I haevn't been really writing like before random lil short something. Thank you =)
20th Jul 2012 2:59am
I think there is a lot to be said for the dense, concise read. Most peoplethese days have short attention spans due to the barrage of Video.
If a longer piece needs be read, instead of experienced live, I think it loses impact for a lot of people.
My stuff tends to ramble so much --
so I finally wrote something dense today:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/60996-no-matter-the-scale/
if you wish
If a longer piece needs be read, instead of experienced live, I think it loses impact for a lot of people.
My stuff tends to ramble so much --
so I finally wrote something dense today:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/60996-no-matter-the-scale/
if you wish
